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Haiku 1

Snow glitters on ground Moonlight reflects on surface Winter's perfection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/30/2013 11:51:00 PM
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I had no idea you tried your hand at haiku before... cool! This was a lot more poetic than my first haiku (the poem I have titled Haiku 1 just means the first one I posted on the site... not the actually first I wrote). I love that eerie feeling you get in wintertime. It's 3 o'clock in the morning and it looks like the middle of the day... fun to walk around it though. Maybe go so far as to say "winter's perfection"... lol.
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Rollo West
Date: 12/17/2012 11:21:00 AM
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Hi Richard, what a great Haiku, really loved the imagery created. Rollo
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Russell Sivey
Date: 12/17/2012 7:39:00 AM
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I'm no expert on Haiku, and will never say I am, but i believe this is an excellent Haiku my friend, to my knowledge anyway! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening write this morning! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 7:50:00 AM
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Thanks Russell, you are always so encouraging.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/17/2012 7:27:00 AM
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Might be 'winter's perfection' but I'm a 'warm and sunshiny' kinda guy! Have a Merry! Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 7:33:00 AM
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You to Jack
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Nina Mindova
Date: 12/17/2012 7:22:00 AM
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Hello.Happy New Year! I really like poetry. Here in Sofia is so white!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 7:32:00 AM
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Where is Sofia?
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/17/2012 3:12:00 AM
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Wonderful image Richard, such a magical haiku :) - hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 6:39:00 AM
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Still not sure if I have this style right.
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David Williams
Date: 12/17/2012 2:49:00 AM
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Richard great image...David
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 6:39:00 AM
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Thanks David
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2012 2:11:00 AM
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Yes, it is ! Well done haiku, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2012 6:40:00 AM
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Cute picture Anne Lise.

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