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Hai-Ku 1

Hai-ku

Hi, cute,
High coo
Hai ,who?


S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 30 mar 17,
for Brian Strand's contest

Copyright © S.Jagathsimhan Nair | Year Posted 2012

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June 3, 2015 at 11:59 PM

LOL. really cute

Elizabeth Wesley

May 23, 2012 at 12:13 PM

Clever and sooo cute Jag, short and sweet is really specail! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 13, 2012 at 6:14 AM

Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Jag. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

April 12, 2012 at 10:28 PM

Jag, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD

March 25, 2012 at 8:03 PM

LOL, now that's a first. in my language, 'ku' is a suffix for possession. hai-ku here would mean 'my hello' ;)

March 25, 2012 at 6:20 PM

Cute one..Good luck in the contests..Sara

March 24, 2012 at 10:11 AM

hai means yes in japanese. so yes, keep writing.

Cyndi Macmillan

March 24, 2012 at 8:51 AM

Hi-there, hai-NEW, hai-oh-boy-you-too? Hai-all-is-good-in-this-hai-stew. Hai-forms? TWO! Hugs to Jag, thanks for the comments. Cyndi

March 24, 2012 at 5:13 AM

woohhoo to you, jag!.. so unique!..:) huggs!

Doris Culverhouse

March 23, 2012 at 6:52 PM

Ai-choo to you ....sorry! cute poem!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 23, 2012 at 12:54 PM

Funny one.... :) :) - oxox Anne-Lise

March 23, 2012 at 11:21 AM

hahaha...very nice Jag...enjoyed.Thanks for your comment at my poem.

March 23, 2012 at 10:08 AM

nice word play - great piece

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