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held with his aged hands lie folded with silken lines one thousand poems

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Date: 12/1/2024 10:12:00 PM
Beautiful and soulfully moving haiku, so descriptive too, and i love how youv especially written “ lie folded with silken lines“ this line speaks volumes to me and your use of lie and line in that line is visually pleasing! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light
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