Haiku-# 1

Lone daffodil sways

Defying April's last gust

Rose bud winks with glee .




A tale of late Spring .....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:29 PM
ps This one could be in Linda' contest with footnote to Spring!
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:29 PM
A vibrant garden of verse!
Gass Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 8:32 AM
They hold on to hope with all their might for the better day to come. Could be a lesson in here for all of us! Beautiful image painted here, Sean! Think I'll hang this one in the Palace! Thank you for sharing, the Queen is pleased! QR
George   Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 3:20 AM
Oh! I see this clearly and feel the breathe of Spring. Love this Haiku, Sean. Lainie
Moreno Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 12:46 AM
This is a word painting...indeed
Degenhardt Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 10:25 AM
Love the beauty of this piece! It's alive through the flower and the write is superb! Michael
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