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Haiku 16 About the Butterfly

wings flutter across my left cheek a tickling smile

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/27/2013 12:20:00 AM

Awesome! What an honor to be close to something so fleeting... always a treat to notice one... great haiku (and in the traditional sense as well!).

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/27/2013 9:49:00 AM

Excellent! You are very good at haiku

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/2/2013 10:32:00 AM

Hi Charmaine, I like your butterflies too. This one is so light and happy. Thanks for the info about Malta; I found it all quite interesting.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 3:32:00 AM

Hi Charma, stopping by to wish you a happy good night.. nice haiku~ LUV*PD

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2012 1:53:00 PM

You are tickling my chubby cheeks here, Charma! And I think he landed on my eyelashes too!...What a great aha moment for a haiku! Luv, Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/15/2012 11:44:00 AM

nice one sweetie! SOUP MAIL Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2012 3:50:00 PM

what an awesome image. I love this , Charma

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 5/8/2012 8:56:00 PM

ha.hah nice.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/8/2012 10:21:00 AM

and smiles as I read this! I love the thought of that butterfly tickling your cheek! ^_^! How are you lovely lucky Charma? Shucks, I am so sorry I missed greeting you on your birthday :(! It was on May 1? Allow me to send you belated birthday wishes, love and hugs!! Better late than never right? I am sure you had a wonderful birthday and continue being the bright light that you are-- I wish you more love and health :D!! Smiles and love to you!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/7/2012 8:44:00 AM

A delight to read this happy haiku! Lovely!

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2012 8:24:00 AM

Wow!Very nice Charma!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 7:10:00 AM

I can just see the scene..Enjoyed..Sara