Haiku 16 About the Butterfly

wings flutter across my left cheek a tickling smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/27/2013 12:20:00 AM
Awesome! What an honor to be close to something so fleeting... always a treat to notice one... great haiku (and in the traditional sense as well!).
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Date: 3/27/2013 9:49:00 AM
Excellent! You are very good at haiku
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Date: 2/2/2013 10:32:00 AM
Hi Charmaine, I like your butterflies too. This one is so light and happy. Thanks for the info about Malta; I found it all quite interesting.
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:32:00 AM
Hi Charma, stopping by to wish you a happy good night.. nice haiku~ LUV*PD
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Date: 5/19/2012 1:53:00 PM
You are tickling my chubby cheeks here, Charma! And I think he landed on my eyelashes too!...What a great aha moment for a haiku! Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/15/2012 11:44:00 AM
nice one sweetie! SOUP MAIL Light & Love
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:50:00 PM
what an awesome image. I love this , Charma
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:56:00 PM
ha.hah nice.
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:21:00 AM
and smiles as I read this! I love the thought of that butterfly tickling your cheek! ^_^! How are you lovely lucky Charma? Shucks, I am so sorry I missed greeting you on your birthday :(! It was on May 1? Allow me to send you belated birthday wishes, love and hugs!! Better late than never right? I am sure you had a wonderful birthday and continue being the bright light that you are-- I wish you more love and health :D!! Smiles and love to you!!
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:44:00 AM
A delight to read this happy haiku! Lovely!
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:24:00 AM
Wow!Very nice Charma!!
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:10:00 AM
I can just see the scene..Enjoyed..Sara
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