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Haiku 15

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/23/2013 11:23:00 AM

There are so many possibilities here. Maybe that is what makes it so good. The many different situations that can fill the mind.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2012 6:09:00 AM

I really love this one.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 7:21:00 AM

thanks Andrea.. lets drink some hot cocoa and forget all the Winter Solitude :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/12/2012 6:02:00 PM

Charma, I have seen all your haikus, very charming, they are,..keep writing, jag

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 7:20:00 AM

thanks so much Jag :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/12/2012 11:59:00 AM

This just gives such an enchanting image for me right now-- needed this-- thanks-- read your other posts next time-- very cute oink! Here's my attempt: ^@^ <--- haha. Hugs to you sweetie!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 7:20:00 AM

:) great attempt lol

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/12/2012 9:20:00 AM

They must be filled with fire flies.. I remember those days... Nostalgically wonderful my friend...:JP]

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2012 7:52:00 AM

wow wonderful imagery sustains these lines Charma luv.. hope u entered it into Tracie's contest on Haiku luv..

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 8:13:00 AM

thanks Linda.. Not for contest dear..but i defintely be reading the entries..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 4/12/2012 7:10:00 AM

Wow, a great bunch of haiku. I love them all but think 10 and 14 are my faves. I'll probably changed my mind, there all so good! Thanks for your kind comments on my haiku and putting them in your faves. I am honored, Charma. God bless you, Rhonda :))

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 7:13:00 AM

Thanks so much Rhonda.. I hardly participate in contests,i posted them just for the fun of haiku.. and not for contset,but i do support anyone particpating and i really believe you have great haiku which should be in the contest winning list.. bravo

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 4/12/2012 7:08:00 AM

Looks like same. Nice one.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 7:12:00 AM

tnks

Željko Sitar

Date: 4/12/2012 3:03:00 AM

I read them all 15 and there is so much beauty in your haiku poems. Love from Croatia!!!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 5:43:00 AM

thanks so much Zeljko :)

David Williams

Date: 4/12/2012 2:06:00 AM

Charma, read them all now, they are great, if for Tracies contest good luck..David

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 5:43:00 AM

Thanks, they aren't for the contest David.I hardly participate in any contests.In the 3yrs I've been here i had participated once in Andrea's contest and recently in the 'bite me'contest by Linda,cos i know its for fun.Somehow i find it hard to participate..but i do enjoy giving all my support to my friends and i do hope tracie's contest would be filled with wonderful haiku,thanks for reading David,much appreciated,Charma

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/12/2012 12:59:00 AM

a special thanks to my friends Deborah,Charles,Michael, and my haiku group friends who helped out by their opinions and advice.. thankyou.. Charma :)