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pioneer street signs gaslights became electric sunlight never lasts

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Katherine Stella

Date: 9/19/2010 9:30:00 AM

hey Jim congrats on this being featured this reminds me of my dads old plymouth fury great write keep on penning my friend enjoyed

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2010 5:36:00 PM

Hello, James here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.

Darius Knight

Date: 9/18/2010 2:06:00 PM

NICE!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2010 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup James. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2010 3:57:00 PM

Congrats Jimbo on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an enjoyable piece to share with us all..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2010 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on our featured Haiku..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2010 3:20:00 PM

ahhh but would we value it as highly if it did? Light & Love Haiku Master San

Brian Strand

Date: 4/26/2009 12:53:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comment oday Jim.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/19/2009 11:27:00 PM

The change of light and times is nice, a good study of both...Raul

Cynthia Ondrich

Date: 3/19/2009 7:27:00 PM

Hi James, that is a great haiku ! It's so amazing when you can use such few words to show such a big picture and capture a feeling and a sense of time. Very nice! And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Cynthia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/11/2009 8:20:00 AM

James, the image of gaslights makes me long for better days. Wish I had lived when they lined the "pioneer streets." Beautiful poem! And thanks for your comments on "Unicorn." Best wishes, Carolyn

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/10/2009 5:56:00 AM

Oh how true this one is. Nice Haiku. I like the way you bring the different types of light into this one. Sort of making the reader see things in a whole new light...LOL! Smiles from Lolita

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/10/2009 5:44:00 AM

again some truth--LOL