Haiku

waves crash lake pepin train whistles echo bluffside I wonder my place

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Date: 11/15/2021 12:15:00 PM

You write some beautiful haikus!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/15/2021 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Kim

Date: 7/14/2010 12:41:00 PM

Nature does make us stop and reflect "our place" in the whole scheme of things. I love this little reflection....so nicely done! ~ Love, Carrie

Date: 7/13/2010 7:12:00 AM

Lovely Congrats on having it featured. Rhonda Hero

Date: 7/12/2010 8:35:00 PM

Congrats Jimbo on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a charmer to share with us al... with luv..

Date: 7/12/2010 10:22:00 AM

Yep! The water 'll get to ya. Congrats on this selection. Love, Dave

Date: 7/12/2010 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol

Date: 4/27/2009 7:47:00 AM

One of your best in this genreJim.Rgds Brian

Date: 3/19/2009 11:25:00 PM

nice descriptions, great use of imagery...Raul

Date: 3/11/2009 1:58:00 AM

well written haiku.. nicely done! ~ Arany

Date: 3/10/2009 5:44:00 AM

I and I wonder mine too great write