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sunrise beckons time zones meteors laugh at such rules quantum physics grins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/15/2021 12:14:00 PM
This one is terrific. I join in the wonderment!
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Date: 11/15/2021 7:59:00 PM
I wish I was smart enough to elaborate, now there's an idea!
Date: 6/13/2010 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 12:13:00 PM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:34:00 AM
Wondeful haiku James - many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/8/2010 3:32:00 PM
Congrats on this selection. You left me after the first line. Love, daver
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:09:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/13/2009 6:44:00 AM
Nice scientific write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 3/19/2009 11:24:00 PM
Combining nature and science in a lovely way. So much said in three lines. I enjoy writing Haiku's and Senryu's, great job...Raul
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Date: 3/10/2009 5:45:00 AM
loved it
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Date: 3/10/2009 5:35:00 AM
Wow, this one is really beautifully done. It makes the reader stop and take notice of nature and science. As the sun is just beginning to rise here I thank you for making me see it. Have a great day! Smiles from Lolita
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