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haiku

wind blown fall leaves dance
             reminding me of my journey
tossed and turned each day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/25/2010 3:30:00 PM
A lovely haiku, James,....and deserving this featured place! Perfectly beautiful! :)
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congrats Jimbo on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great Haiku from u to share with us all ... excellent choice to feature ...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/24/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congrats Jim on this bweing featured loved the imagery in this one nice play on words here thanks for sharing keep up the great work
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2009 11:44:00 AM
Nice analogy, nice haiku...Raul
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Date: 6/5/2009 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Jim, I am more than pale, would probably scare a child ~lol~ that struck me funny. Thanks for your get well wishes, going back to bed, blah. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/19/2009 11:20:00 PM
Subtle words describe a nice metaphor of life. nice work...Raul
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Date: 3/10/2009 5:43:00 AM
wonderful
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Date: 3/10/2009 5:31:00 AM
Beautiful poem James, much meaning.
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