Haiku 13 - October Sky

clouds apple painted
a ripe orchard for angels
celestial harvest

terra cotta reds
smoky haze of forests' fires
October skies blush

pine spires prick the clouds
skies bleeding down in beauty
sunsets of the gods

Copyright, August 20, 2015

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Date: 11/25/2017 7:37:00 AM
Loverly imagery and great use of phraseology, Faye! Love the "skies bleeding" part. Regards, John.
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Date: 1/8/2016 11:40:00 PM
faye, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:27:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Faye:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:16:00 AM
Faye, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:09:00 PM
Love your imagery, Faye! All 3 haiku are a delight to read, especially the last one! ~ Congratulations on a merited win. All the best. // paul
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:04:00 AM
Faye, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:55:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Faye! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/22/2015 6:38:00 PM
These are wonderful Faye!! Love each one!
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:45:00 PM
this is gorgeous and the best I have seen yet. Hope it scores high.
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Date: 8/20/2015 5:31:00 PM
such a visual treat, faye.. much enjoyed...huggs
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Date: 8/20/2015 4:46:00 PM
Absolutely delightful imagery Faye good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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