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Haiku 137

greeting the morning the authority of snow told schools to just chill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 1/20/2018 4:13:00 PM
Change the G to g, remove the punctuation and you have the perfect haiku. ;-) Loads of respect and best forever wishes... Mick
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Millard Lowe
Date: 1/20/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Mick for the read and useful feedback. I followed your feedback and got a clear picture with respect to classic haiku. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.