Haiku

falling rock cut tree thick resin flow insect trap amber time capsule

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Ann Foster

Date: 5/15/2021 7:40:00 PM

Excellent imagery... Ann

Warren Doll
Date: 5/26/2021 12:21:00 PM

Ann, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the visit~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2021 3:52:00 PM

yes, the reason for amber! It's so cool how that works!

Warren Doll
Date: 4/2/2021 11:07:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for your visit and comment. All the best~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2021 10:02:00 AM

Very descriptive work. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 2/20/2021 5:39:00 AM

Hi Sara, I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for visiting~ Warren.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2021 6:34:00 AM

Nice way to describe how an insect gets to be perfectly preserved for many future ages.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/24/2021 7:45:00 AM

Robert, glad you liked it. thanks for stopping by~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/20/2021 3:21:00 PM

An excellent visual created by this little gem!

Warren Doll
Date: 1/21/2021 7:35:00 AM

Mike, Thanks for you wonderful comment. Always great to hear from you. All the best~ Warren

Judy Ball

Date: 1/19/2021 2:16:00 PM

Love this. Very clever. Could see the tree with the rock against it and the sap flowing. An amber time capsule. Good job. God Bless, JB

Warren Doll
Date: 1/20/2021 10:30:00 AM

Judy, thanks so much for your positive comments and visit~ Warren.

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/18/2021 5:59:00 PM

Ah excellent Warren. The amber time capsule was brilliant :)

Warren Doll
Date: 1/19/2021 9:49:00 AM

So glad that you liked it so much, Thanks for the positive comments~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 1/18/2021 12:08:00 PM

adore it a peach of a haiku such intense imagery this is a true gem:-) hugs Jan

Warren Doll
Date: 1/19/2021 9:46:00 AM

Jan, thanks so much. It's great hearing from you. Glad you liked it, Hugs back to you~ Warren