Haiku

falling rock cut tree 
thick resin flow insect trap
amber time capsule
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May 15, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Excellent imagery... Ann
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May 26, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Ann, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the visit~ Warren
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March 18, 2021 at 3:52 PM
yes, the reason for amber! It's so cool how that works!
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April 2, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Andrea, thanks for your visit and comment. All the best~ Warren
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February 14, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Very descriptive work. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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February 20, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Hi Sara, I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for visiting~ Warren.
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January 22, 2021 at 6:34 AM
Nice way to describe how an insect gets to be perfectly preserved for many future ages.
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January 24, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Robert, glad you liked it. thanks for stopping by~ Warren
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January 20, 2021 at 3:21 PM
An excellent visual created by this little gem!
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January 21, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Mike, Thanks for you wonderful comment. Always great to hear from you. All the best~ Warren
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January 19, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Love this. Very clever. Could see the tree with the rock against it and the sap flowing. An amber time capsule. Good job. God Bless, JB
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January 20, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Judy, thanks so much for your positive comments and visit~ Warren.
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January 18, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Ah excellent Warren. The amber time capsule was brilliant :)
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January 19, 2021 at 9:49 AM
So glad that you liked it so much, Thanks for the positive comments~ Warren
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January 18, 2021 at 12:08 PM
adore it a peach of a haiku such intense imagery this is a true gem:-) hugs Jan
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January 19, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Jan, thanks so much. It's great hearing from you. Glad you liked it, Hugs back to you~ Warren
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