Haiku

on a bitter wind
brown leaves swirl then settle down
rain spatters the earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 4:12 PM
such vivid description i feel quite chilled especially as it is a reflection of our current weather - brrr:-) hugs jan xx
Raiser Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 6:49 PM
That's our winter in the south. Thanks Jan.
Ashley Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Oh, I love your atmospheric imagery, beautifully done, Beldon. A sensory feast evoking a strong visual. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
Raiser Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Hi Susan, that is so kind of you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 3:21 PM
I love the images you used . One of my favorites on the winner list!
Raiser Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Hi Andrea, I was a little surprised at how fast Brian judged it, and that I placed. Thank you for commenting.
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