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Haiku 12 Stars Twinkle

stars twinkle in empty distance my eyes wink

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Date: 2/20/2013 12:06:00 PM

Stars and the human eye are so different, yet both fascinating. I really lends the charm to this one. Thanks for more stops on my humble page.

Date: 4/13/2012 6:11:00 AM

NIce how you related the stars to your sweet eyes.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 4:15:00 PM

my poo poo colour eyes you meant Andrea ?:) thanks for being able to see sweetness in a desert :)

Date: 4/12/2012 9:27:00 AM

Must have been a clear, beautiful sky. One where the moon and all stars are apparent.. Another good one!!:JP}

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/13/2012 4:15:00 PM

a magical sky Jared

Date: 4/12/2012 7:05:00 AM

So beautiful.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/12/2012 7:06:00 AM

thankyou.. the universe mesmerize me all the time..