Haiku 123 321

dawn
sunrise
brand new day


dark
clear night
meteors


sea
Iceberg
titanic


rain
sunshine
spectrum arc


hot
humid
thunderstorms








Written 19th September 2018

For haiku 123 or 321  contest sponsored by Charles Messina.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/26/2024 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Creative way to go with the contest. Sara K
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/26/2024 2:33:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Sara. Tom
Date: 10/10/2018 9:08:00 PM
Great string of Haiku, Tom, congratulations on your win. <3
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/11/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve. Tom.
Date: 10/9/2018 4:23:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Tom, lovely haiku my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/9/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. Tom.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:55:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Tom. Well done.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/9/2018 12:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Line. Tom.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:47:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/9/2018 12:55:00 PM
Thank you very much Sunshine.. Tom.
Date: 10/9/2018 10:44:00 AM
Great imagery Tom. You did a terrific job on this new form. Love this one! Congratulations on your win and thank you dear friend for trying this form and entering my contest...Charlie
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/9/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Charlie. I do like the new form, the 'charlieku' . Thank you for hosting. Tom.
Date: 10/9/2018 9:50:00 AM
Tom, a well deserved win. Congratulations ~Warren
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/9/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Warren. Tom.
Date: 9/23/2018 2:14:00 PM
A well crafted set of Haikus with the fine touch of an adept poet.. Captivating images of Nature! The best of luck in the contest Tom. Best regards. Be blessed always.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/9/2018 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Besma, apologies for the late reply. Regards. Tom.
Date: 9/21/2018 8:46:00 AM
So creative, Tom. Good luck in the contest. ~ Warren
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/21/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Warren, I had to take some out as I'd done to many. Tom
Date: 9/20/2018 6:26:00 PM
very nice, Tom. I may be mistaken but did he put a limit on the number of them? I was thinking no more than 5 or six. Good luck in the contest.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/21/2018 1:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, you're right, I got carried away lol. I'll take a few out. Tom
Date: 9/19/2018 1:12:00 PM
What an excellent string of 'haiku', Tom! Your muse has been working overtime:) Regards // paul
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2018 2:30:00 PM
She certainly has Paul lol, Thank you. Tom
Date: 9/19/2018 10:16:00 AM
I like the words you used to describe the different seasons; a midwesterner perhaps?
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2018 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I'm firmly in the UK lol. I only used fall because I couldn't use autumn , two syllables. Tom
Date: 9/19/2018 7:58:00 AM
Great Charlieku! Good luck in the contest :)) xomo!
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Date: 9/19/2018 12:49:00 PM
The closest I've come is a two word poem ;)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, Charlie has started something now, bring on the one word hakiu lol. Tom
Date: 9/19/2018 7:22:00 AM
This is excellent the way you describe it. The first two lines (words) evoke the imagery of the third line. Cleverly executed. Best for a win, Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, I enjoy doing these but they seem to be getting shorter and you really have to give them some thought. Tom
Date: 9/19/2018 5:22:00 AM
Display of brilliance dear friend. Tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, happy you liked them. Tom
Date: 9/19/2018 3:51:00 AM
This is clever short poetry, nice little form... You did it very well..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/19/2018 4:00:00 AM
Thanks S.O. , i think it was W.W. that gave them the name charlieku, lol. Tom.
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