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Haiku 123

aged leaflets gold and crisp hued scarlet whirligigs wind briskly blows and shakes yard lettuce raked and tossed bones of oak left leafless 9/14/2018

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Eve Roper
Date: 10/10/2018 8:52:00 PM
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Beautiful imagery , Kim, congratulations on your win. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:09:00 PM
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Thank you, Eve! <3
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Charles Messina
Date: 10/9/2018 4:49:00 PM
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I love the ending to this poem Kim! Great work on this new form. Congratulations on your win and many thanks for entering my contest. Charlie :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:09:00 PM
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Thank you, Charles! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2018 4:30:00 PM
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fabulous imagery Kim, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:10:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 12:08:00 PM
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Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:11:00 PM
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Thanks, Line!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2018 11:42:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your great haiku, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:12:00 PM
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Thanks, Anne-Lise!
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Warren Doll
Date: 10/9/2018 10:00:00 AM
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Fantastic imagery, Kim. Congratulations on your win. ~Warren
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2018 9:12:00 PM
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Thanks, Warren!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/19/2018 5:27:00 PM
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wow, you did really well with this challenge. I love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2018 5:36:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea! <3 Kim
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/17/2018 2:19:00 PM
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This gives me the feeling of walking through the woods on a pretty autumn afternoon!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2018 5:03:00 PM
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:)
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 9/16/2018 9:05:00 PM
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.... and winter is running in. nice write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2018 5:05:00 AM
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For sure! Thank you, Lewis!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/15/2018 4:14:00 AM
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Nice hakiu Kim, love the last one. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2018 6:44:00 AM
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Thank you, Tom!

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