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Haiku 123

aged
leaflets
gold and crisp

hued
scarlet
whirligigs

wind
briskly
blows and shakes

yard
lettuce
raked and tossed

bones
of oak
left leafless

9/14/2018

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2018

autumnnaturetreehaiku

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October 10, 2018 at 8:52 PM

Beautiful imagery , Kim, congratulations on your win. <3

October 10, 2018 at 9:09 PM

Thank you, Eve! <3

Charles Messina

October 9, 2018 at 4:49 PM

I love the ending to this poem Kim! Great work on this new form. Congratulations on your win and many thanks for entering my contest. Charlie :)

October 10, 2018 at 9:09 PM

Thank you, Charles! :)

October 9, 2018 at 4:30 PM

fabulous imagery Kim, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

October 10, 2018 at 9:10 PM

Thanks, Jan!

October 9, 2018 at 12:08 PM

Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.

October 10, 2018 at 9:11 PM

Thanks, Line!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 9, 2018 at 11:42 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 10, 2018 at 9:12 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

October 9, 2018 at 10:00 AM

Fantastic imagery, Kim. Congratulations on your win. ~Warren

October 10, 2018 at 9:12 PM

Thanks, Warren!

Andrea Dietrich

September 19, 2018 at 5:27 PM

wow, you did really well with this challenge. I love it!

September 19, 2018 at 5:36 PM

Thank you, Andrea! <3 Kim

Michelle Faulkner

September 17, 2018 at 2:19 PM

This gives me the feeling of walking through the woods on a pretty autumn afternoon!

September 17, 2018 at 5:03 PM

:)

September 16, 2018 at 9:05 PM

.... and winter is running in. nice write

September 17, 2018 at 5:05 AM

For sure! Thank you, Lewis!

September 15, 2018 at 4:14 AM

Nice hakiu Kim, love the last one. Tom

September 15, 2018 at 6:44 AM

Thank you, Tom!

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