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Haiku 12-2-2016

Haiku 12/2/2016 December daybreak dim sun searching for a smile cold wind biting cheeks John G. Lawless 12/2/2016

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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 9:45:00 AM
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This is beautiful, a chilled poem with a warm feel.
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Christina Baughman
Date: 12/2/2016 8:58:00 AM
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Beautiful, John. I love the whole thing, but oh that middle line.... : )
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John Lawless
Date: 12/2/2016 7:00:00 PM
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Thanks Christina, on those cold, clear December days the sun seems to be lonely.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2016 8:57:00 AM
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Wonderful haiku - the imagery is simply perfect for this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx7
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John Lawless
Date: 12/2/2016 6:58:00 PM
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Thanks Jan, I love the seasons as they do so reflect our moods.

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