Haiku

large tall white snow drifts constant forceful blowing winds shadows being carved

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/3/2019 4:30:00 PM

A carving of shadows is what nature is so capable of doing, Warren. elightful imagery. Regards // paul

Warren Doll
Date: 9/9/2019 8:47:00 AM

Paul, thanks for your comments and visit. All of the best~ Warren

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/1/2019 9:34:00 AM

"shadows being carved" - this is as accurate a description of a snow drift as I have ever heard. They look like rock carvings. Well done! Bravo! Warren, great imagery!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/3/2019 9:05:00 AM

hi Caren, thanks so much for all of our positive comments. All the best~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2019 8:04:00 AM

Your ending line made this haiku have that aha moment all great haiku should have. A superb haiku Warren! xxoo

Warren Doll
Date: 8/21/2019 11:10:00 AM

Connie, thanks so much. I'm so glad that you liked it. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2019 9:02:00 AM

Oh I love the beautiful imagery of your wintry haiku, Warren, especially the last impactful line. Superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 8/21/2019 10:52:00 AM

Susan, thanks for your visit and positive comments, Sending warmest wishes your way~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2019 1:26:00 PM

- Excellent haiku, Warren :) - (I hope it will be a while before we get snow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 8/21/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thanks very much Anne-Lise. I also hope we don't get real snow for awhile, but it is refreshing to create it in a poem. Sending a BIG hug your way~ Warren.