Haiku

haiku

crest of high salt peaks
ruling vast ocean surface
devouring the beach

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Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 8:39:00 PM

Warren, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Warren Doll
Date: 9/9/2021 1:25:00 PM

Constance, thanks for your wonderful comments and visit. All the best~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2021 8:14:00 PM

Hey this is really great! Congrats, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 9/9/2021 1:22:00 PM

Andrea, thanks so much.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/3/2021 6:57:00 PM

Back with Congrats on your well deserved placement Warren!!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/9/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thanks again, Mike

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/3/2021 6:56:00 PM

Back with Congrats on your well deserved placement Warren!!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/9/2021 1:20:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/6/2019 3:35:00 PM

The force of Mother Nature's winter season is having chilling effects all over the world Warren. Your haiku is splendid and 'high salt peaks' is so visually excellent as kigo . A wonderful haiku Warren. : ) xxoo

Warren Doll
Date: 3/11/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thanks so much for all of your positive comments, Connie. Have a wonderful week. Best Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2019 5:38:00 PM

Very dramatic imagery Warren, we have storm force 9 winds at the moment I'd love to see the sea crashing onto the beach but its too inclement to go out:-) tomorrow we will see the devastation caused by the storm:-( hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 3/5/2019 9:54:00 PM

Hi Jan, glad that you liked. I hope you didn't have any damage from the storm. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Elaine George

Date: 2/16/2019 4:50:00 AM

a GREAT HAIKU, Warren. Thank you for sharing. Elaine

Warren Doll
Date: 2/24/2019 2:05:00 PM

Your welcome and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, Elaine. Warm Wishes~ Warren

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/15/2019 5:37:00 PM

Very nice Haiku Warren :)

Warren Doll
Date: 2/24/2019 2:02:00 PM

Thanks so much, Heidi. All the best~ Warren

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/14/2019 9:10:00 AM

They do! Perfect imagery in so few words.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/15/2019 8:52:00 AM

So glad that you liked it and thanks for visiting. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Bernard Chan

Date: 2/13/2019 6:31:00 PM

Another great haiku, Warren. Sublime imagery. Love the tension in it.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/15/2019 8:49:00 AM

Hi Bernard, thanks for your positive comments and support. Best Wishes~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2019 6:44:00 PM

Oh this is a great image! I’ve seen the salt on a couple beaches.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/8/2019 9:23:00 AM

Hi Kim, so good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/3/2019 3:30:00 PM

Astonishing, dear Warren!

Warren Doll
Date: 2/4/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you and glad to hear from you, Demetrios. All the best good friend~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2019 3:02:00 PM

cute last line!!! Congrats, Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 1/31/2019 7:48:00 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm glad that you liked it. All the best~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2019 8:18:00 AM

- I'm back with congratulations, Warren :)

Warren Doll
Date: 1/31/2019 7:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way. Best to you~ Warren

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/29/2019 7:48:00 AM

A poem of erosion, love this, Warren. congratulations.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/31/2019 7:43:00 AM

Exactly the theme I was going for.. I'm glad that you liked it. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2019 7:53:00 PM

Nice imagery, the waves do diminish the beach, congratulations on your winning placement!

Warren Doll
Date: 1/31/2019 7:39:00 AM

Hi Tania, I enjoyed your contest. Thanks for the winning placement. All the best~ Warren

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/28/2019 7:34:00 PM

Quite the vivid action-packed imagery, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/31/2019 7:36:00 AM

Hi Line, thanks so much. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/28/2019 9:11:00 AM

The last line is my favorite Warren! I love the image it creates in my mind, Good Luck !!

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 10:12:00 AM

Hi Mike, thanks for your positive comments and support. All the best~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2019 4:06:00 AM

- Lovely imagery, Warren :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 10:08:00 AM

Sending a big hug your way. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad that you liked it. It is always great to hear from you~ Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2019 1:59:00 PM

I can smell the ocean, and taste salt when I read this one, Warren. Got to go pour the sand out of my sandals now.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 10:05:00 AM

Caren, I'm glad that you liked it. Hope you were able to get the sand out of your sandals-lol. Warmest wishes~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/27/2019 12:33:00 PM

Love the image Warren, have seen many a house tumble into the sea on TV with cliffs being eaten by the powerful sea. Tom.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 10:01:00 AM

Hi tom, thanks so much for your positive comments. and visit. Best to you~ Warren

Constance La France

Date: 1/27/2019 12:06:00 PM

Warren, love your haiku !

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 9:59:00 AM

Hi Dear Heart, Thanks so much for visiting and commenting. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/27/2019 10:54:00 AM

Yes it does, best wishes Warren...

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 9:57:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Charlie, All the best~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2019 10:05:00 AM

Great imagery, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 1/28/2019 9:55:00 AM

Hi Vijay, thanks so much for your positive comment, Warmest Wishes~ Warren

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