Haiku

haiku

crest of high salt peaks
ruling vast ocean surface
devouring the beach

natureoceanwaterhaiku

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Constance La France

September 8, 2021 at 8:39 PM

Warren, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Warren Doll

September 9, 2021 at 1:25 PM

Constance, thanks for your wonderful comments and visit. All the best~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

September 5, 2021 at 8:14 PM

Hey this is really great! Congrats, Warren.

Warren Doll

September 9, 2021 at 1:22 PM

Andrea, thanks so much.

Mike Gentile

September 3, 2021 at 6:57 PM

Back with Congrats on your well deserved placement Warren!!

Warren Doll

September 9, 2021 at 1:21 PM

Thanks again, Mike

Mike Gentile

September 3, 2021 at 6:56 PM

Back with Congrats on your well deserved placement Warren!!

Warren Doll

September 9, 2021 at 1:20 PM

Thanks so much, Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 6, 2019 at 3:35 PM

The force of Mother Nature's winter season is having chilling effects all over the world Warren. Your haiku is splendid and 'high salt peaks' is so visually excellent as kigo . A wonderful haiku Warren. : ) xxoo

Warren Doll

March 11, 2019 at 4:39 PM

Thanks so much for all of your positive comments, Connie. Have a wonderful week. Best Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison

March 3, 2019 at 5:38 PM

Very dramatic imagery Warren, we have storm force 9 winds at the moment I'd love to see the sea crashing onto the beach but its too inclement to go out:-) tomorrow we will see the devastation caused by the storm:-( hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

March 5, 2019 at 9:54 PM

Hi Jan, glad that you liked. I hope you didn't have any damage from the storm. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Elaine George

February 16, 2019 at 4:50 AM

a GREAT HAIKU, Warren. Thank you for sharing. Elaine

Warren Doll

February 24, 2019 at 2:05 PM

Your welcome and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, Elaine. Warm Wishes~ Warren

Heidi Sands

February 15, 2019 at 5:37 PM

Very nice Haiku Warren :)

Warren Doll

February 24, 2019 at 2:02 PM

Thanks so much, Heidi. All the best~ Warren

M. L. Kiser

February 14, 2019 at 9:10 AM

They do! Perfect imagery in so few words.

Warren Doll

February 15, 2019 at 8:52 AM

So glad that you liked it and thanks for visiting. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Bernard Chan

February 13, 2019 at 6:31 PM

Another great haiku, Warren. Sublime imagery. Love the tension in it.

Warren Doll

February 15, 2019 at 8:49 AM

Hi Bernard, thanks for your positive comments and support. Best Wishes~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

February 4, 2019 at 6:44 PM

Oh this is a great image! I’ve seen the salt on a couple beaches.

Warren Doll

February 8, 2019 at 9:23 AM

Hi Kim, so good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 3, 2019 at 3:30 PM

Astonishing, dear Warren!

Warren Doll

February 4, 2019 at 12:54 PM

Thank you and glad to hear from you, Demetrios. All the best good friend~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2019 at 3:02 PM

cute last line!!! Congrats, Warren

Warren Doll

January 31, 2019 at 7:48 AM

Hi Andrea, I'm glad that you liked it. All the best~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 29, 2019 at 8:18 AM

- I'm back with congratulations, Warren :)

Warren Doll

January 31, 2019 at 7:46 AM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way. Best to you~ Warren

Harry Horsman

January 29, 2019 at 7:48 AM

A poem of erosion, love this, Warren. congratulations.

Warren Doll

January 31, 2019 at 7:43 AM

Exactly the theme I was going for.. I'm glad that you liked it. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Tania Kitchin

January 28, 2019 at 7:53 PM

Nice imagery, the waves do diminish the beach, congratulations on your winning placement!

Warren Doll

January 31, 2019 at 7:39 AM

Hi Tania, I enjoyed your contest. Thanks for the winning placement. All the best~ Warren

Line Gauthier

January 28, 2019 at 7:34 PM

Quite the vivid action-packed imagery, Warren.

Warren Doll

January 31, 2019 at 7:36 AM

Hi Line, thanks so much. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Mike Gentile

January 28, 2019 at 9:11 AM

The last line is my favorite Warren! I love the image it creates in my mind, Good Luck !!

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 10:12 AM

Hi Mike, thanks for your positive comments and support. All the best~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 28, 2019 at 4:06 AM

- Lovely imagery, Warren :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 10:08 AM

Sending a big hug your way. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad that you liked it. It is always great to hear from you~ Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Caren Krutsinger

January 27, 2019 at 1:59 PM

I can smell the ocean, and taste salt when I read this one, Warren. Got to go pour the sand out of my sandals now.

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 10:05 AM

Caren, I'm glad that you liked it. Hope you were able to get the sand out of your sandals-lol. Warmest wishes~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

January 27, 2019 at 12:33 PM

Love the image Warren, have seen many a house tumble into the sea on TV with cliffs being eaten by the powerful sea. Tom.

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 10:01 AM

Hi tom, thanks so much for your positive comments. and visit. Best to you~ Warren

Constance La France

January 27, 2019 at 12:06 PM

Warren, love your haiku !

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 9:59 AM

Hi Dear Heart, Thanks so much for visiting and commenting. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Charlie Smith

January 27, 2019 at 10:54 AM

Yes it does, best wishes Warren...

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 9:57 AM

Glad you liked it, Charlie, All the best~ Warren

Vijay Pandit

January 27, 2019 at 10:05 AM

Great imagery, Warren.

Warren Doll

January 28, 2019 at 9:55 AM

Hi Vijay, thanks so much for your positive comment, Warmest Wishes~ Warren

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