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Haiku 10 - Kiss

where is the rain -- my
heart is parched for the moisture 
of your love, your kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/18/2015 9:30:00 AM
I read longing here, David. Not just a simple kiss...
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David Meade
Date: 3/18/2015 1:49:00 PM
Longing indeed! Much love is always needed even after 30 years of marriage!!
Date: 3/4/2015 7:35:00 AM
mmmmmn!!!! rain and kiss! so sultry! but romantic! wow!
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Date: 2/26/2015 8:10:00 AM
Hmmm very romantic, David! Eileen would love this one!! Have a nice day. // paul
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Date: 1/15/2015 9:28:00 AM
This is a beautifully penned Haiku David. Truly enjoyed. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 12/30/2014 7:41:00 AM
Ahh sweet and romantic desires, well said! :)
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:20:00 AM
Very soft and romantic kiss, beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/31/2014 5:50:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2014 12:46:00 PM
Among all your haiku.. This one is my favorite.. It is so romantic ^^
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David Meade
Date: 10/31/2014 1:43:00 PM
Thank-you Doris, may we always find love and kisses! All the best.
Date: 10/29/2014 12:01:00 AM
oh, yes, a rain of kisses watched for!! Very clever.
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David Meade
Date: 10/29/2014 9:00:00 PM
we all need a little lovin from the ones we hold dear. All the best.
Date: 10/27/2014 2:55:00 AM
Love it Dave! So sweet and romantic! :) enjoyed it! Love and light! xxxx D.
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David Meade
Date: 10/28/2014 9:54:00 PM
D, thank-you for taking time to read my poem. I have been exploring your writings and enjoying my time. Love and light always!
Date: 10/26/2014 8:08:00 PM
oh how romantic a haiku! hugs jan xx
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David Meade
Date: 10/28/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thanks girlfriend, your the best. Till next time.