Haiku

blowing wind sings songs thru valley and mountain pass pierced by man's echo

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/26/2019 3:48:00 PM

Man interfering with nature. Good subject and well done.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/26/2019 10:34:00 AM

Allen, thanks so much for your comments and visit, All the best~ Warren

Carole Duet

Date: 11/20/2018 1:31:00 PM

Nice! I like this one. :D

Warren Doll
Date: 11/21/2018 5:35:00 PM

Hi Carole, Glad you liked it. thanks so much for your visit and support. Warm wishes~ Warren

Deb Radke

Date: 11/15/2018 8:35:00 PM

I can see this. Such good imagery. And thought provoking, as I hear the echo of men in the wilderness. Take care. Deb

Warren Doll
Date: 11/17/2018 8:41:00 AM

Hi Deb, thanks for all of your positive comments and support. Best wishes~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2018 10:30:00 AM

Creative. I am sure that was a exciting sound. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 11/11/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sara. Always good to hear from you. I enjoy reading your poetry. All the best~ Warren

Jean Bush

Date: 11/7/2018 7:55:00 PM

I can hear the wind; no windchimes needed. Well done.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/8/2018 8:44:00 AM

Hi Jean, thanks so much for your positive comments, Best Wishes~ Warren

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/6/2018 4:12:00 PM

Oh to be taken there, so visual Warren, love this.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/8/2018 8:41:00 AM

Harry, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks for your visit and support, Best Wishes~ Warren

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/3/2018 11:13:00 AM

Warren, I REALLY like this! Janice

Warren Doll
Date: 11/3/2018 5:14:00 PM

Janice, thanks for your positive compliment and visit. I'm glad that you liked it. All the best~ Warren

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/31/2018 11:51:00 AM

Marvelous dear, Warren!

Warren Doll
Date: 11/1/2018 7:34:00 AM

My friend Demetrios, thanks so much for your positive comments and visit. All the best~Warren

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/31/2018 9:33:00 AM

Wow, this one is great and reminds me of being in the mountains, where I am here. Well written Warren :)

Warren Doll
Date: 11/1/2018 7:30:00 AM

Hi Heidi, thanks so much. Glad you liked it. Warm wishes~Warren

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2018 1:10:00 AM

So interesting to me that three of us thought of the wind talking to us yesterday and wrote a poem about it. The universal mind is smiling, and sending such great ideas to our muses! Nicely done, Warren. Beautiful.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/30/2018 6:00:00 PM

Caren, thanks so much for visiting and for your positive comments Yes, the universe was talking to us. How wonderful~Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/29/2018 2:49:00 PM

Your wonderful haiku is full of beautiful imagery Warren! I can hear it !! Happy Monday!!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/29/2018 4:18:00 PM

Hi Mike, I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for all of your support~ Warren. Happy Monday to you too.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/29/2018 2:13:00 PM

Lovely haiku my friend...love & light...^WW^

Warren Doll
Date: 10/29/2018 4:20:00 PM

Thanks very much, WW. Peace~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2018 2:02:00 PM

- I hear both the wind and the echo, very well written - If this is for contest ... I wish you good luck, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/29/2018 4:23:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, always good to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comments and support. Big hug coming your way ~Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/29/2018 1:01:00 PM

Excellent imagery and cadence in your words..well written, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/29/2018 4:26:00 PM

Great to hear from you, Vijay. Thanks for your positive comments and visit ~Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2018 10:08:00 AM

Now this is how to write a great Haiku!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/29/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thanks so much, Richard. I'm glad that you liked it. ~Warren

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/29/2018 9:56:00 AM

Nice Warren...Winds carry messages...and it's definitely pierced by man's echo...All the best my friend...

Warren Doll
Date: 10/29/2018 10:05:00 AM

Hi Arturo, thanks for your comments and visit. Very appreciated. All the best to you too.`Warren