Haiku

rain drops hit still pond
surface ripples spread outward
tickling frog bellies

animalfunnyrainweatherhaiku

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Timothy Ray

September 12, 2026 at 10:21 AM

a small amount of words that deposit large amounts of warmth within....great imagery

Valerie Staton

February 6, 2019 at 9:22 PM

You paint a beautiful picture with your words.

Warren Doll

February 13, 2019 at 12:46 PM

Thanks very much, Valerie. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

October 22, 2018 at 1:54 PM

Unexpected ending. Calm, engaging lines. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Warren Doll

October 22, 2018 at 3:59 PM

Sara, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren

Paul Marc

October 19, 2018 at 2:49 PM

This poem tickled my belly. Thanks for the rain drop ripple ;)

Warren Doll

October 20, 2018 at 5:42 PM

So very glad that you liked it, P.M. ~ Warren :)

Bernard Chan

October 11, 2018 at 7:11 PM

Brilliant, lovely imagery. Such a delight to read. FAV.

Warren Doll

October 12, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Bernard, thanks for your positive comments. I am glad that you enjoyed it and honored that you consider it a FAV, ~Warren

Roy Pett

September 26, 2018 at 12:45 PM

Thoroughly enjoyed reading your haiku Warren, the last line is excellent. :))

Warren Doll

September 28, 2018 at 8:05 AM

Roy, always enjoy hearing from you. I'm glad that you liked it and for your comments. :)) ~Warren

Anisha Dutta

September 26, 2018 at 12:42 PM

Really nice. I appreciate

Warren Doll

September 28, 2018 at 8:03 AM

Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Anisha,

Janice Canerdy

September 17, 2018 at 4:15 PM

Good one, Warren! Janice

Warren Doll

September 18, 2018 at 4:42 PM

Janice, So glad that you liked it and thanks for your visit. ~Warren

Carole Duet

September 15, 2018 at 10:01 AM

So simple and so delightful. I don't usually like haikus but this one is exceptional. I would never have imagined the water "tickling" a frog's belly. lol

Warren Doll

September 16, 2018 at 9:24 AM

Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Carole. I'm very glad that you liked it ~Warren.

Phyllis Babcock

September 13, 2018 at 12:59 PM

A gem enjoyed the visual. love phyl

Warren Doll

September 14, 2018 at 10:40 AM

Hi Phyllis, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for visiting ~Warren

Pandita Sietesantos

September 13, 2018 at 12:02 PM

Warren, you wowed me with this sweet, whimsical Haiku! Excellently written, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll

September 14, 2018 at 10:38 AM

Pandita, so good to hear from you. I'm glad you were wowed. Thanks for all of your positive comments and support. Sending hugs your way~ Warren

Silent One

September 12, 2018 at 7:47 AM

Great imagery Warren..

Warren Doll

September 12, 2018 at 4:54 PM

Thank you for your positive comment and visit, Silent One.

Joseph P. DiMino

September 12, 2018 at 4:26 AM

Now I know why they croak so fondly. Great work, Warren!

Warren Doll

September 12, 2018 at 4:53 PM

Hi Joe, thanks for your visit and humorous comment and visit~Warren

Dean Wood

September 11, 2018 at 11:50 AM

LOL, the image is killing me! Love it!

Warren Doll

September 12, 2018 at 4:49 PM

Glad you liked it and that it made you laugh, Thanks~Warren

Caren Krutsinger

September 11, 2018 at 3:32 AM

I want a frog belly now, you have made it sound utterly appealing, my friend!

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 9:07 AM

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Caren. Thanks for stopping by ~ Warren:)

Heidi Sands

September 10, 2018 at 6:25 PM

This is a great creation Warren. Cute! :)

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 9:04 AM

Hi Heidi, thanks for your positive comments. I'm glad that you liked it. ~ Warren:)

Mike Gentile

September 10, 2018 at 12:47 PM

What a cheerful haiku Warren!!! the little frogs are giggling just sweet and peaceful Happy Monday !!

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 9:01 AM

Thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Mike. Happy Tuesday ~Warren.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 10, 2018 at 12:31 AM

- A brilliant haiku, Warren ... loves the last line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 8:54 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, It's always so good to hear from you. Thanks for your visit and positive comments. Big hugs~ Warren:))

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 9, 2018 at 10:16 PM

I love it! Tickled by it! A fave :)) xomo

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 8:50 AM

I'm so happy that you liked it, Maureen. I'm honored that you consider it a fav. ~Warren:))

Susan Ashley

September 9, 2018 at 9:18 PM

Oh, your imagery is just fantastic, Warren. I love the playful nature of your last line.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 8:45 AM

Hi Susan, I'm so glad that you liked it. Warmest wishes~Warren

Arturo Michael

September 9, 2018 at 5:55 PM

Very creative visuals...I can see little bubbles settling on their stomach...All the best Warren

Warren Doll

September 11, 2018 at 8:42 AM

Thanks for your positive comments and visit, Arturo. All the best to you too.

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