Haiku

rain drops hit still pond surface ripples spread outward tickling frog bellies

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Valerie Staton

Date: 2/6/2019 9:22:00 PM

You paint a beautiful picture with your words.

Warren Doll
Date: 2/13/2019 12:46:00 PM

Thanks very much, Valerie. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2018 1:54:00 PM

Unexpected ending. Calm, engaging lines. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 10/22/2018 3:59:00 PM

Sara, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren

P.M. Richter

Date: 10/19/2018 2:49:00 PM

This poem tickled my belly. Thanks for the rain drop ripple ;)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/20/2018 5:42:00 PM

So very glad that you liked it, P.M. ~ Warren :)

Bernard Chan

Date: 10/11/2018 7:11:00 PM

Brilliant, lovely imagery. Such a delight to read. FAV.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/12/2018 6:20:00 PM

Bernard, thanks for your positive comments. I am glad that you enjoyed it and honored that you consider it a FAV, ~Warren

Roy Pett

Date: 9/26/2018 12:45:00 PM

Thoroughly enjoyed reading your haiku Warren, the last line is excellent. :))

Warren Doll
Date: 9/28/2018 8:05:00 AM

Roy, always enjoy hearing from you. I'm glad that you liked it and for your comments. :)) ~Warren

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/26/2018 12:42:00 PM

Really nice. I appreciate

Warren Doll
Date: 9/28/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Anisha,

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/17/2018 4:15:00 PM

Good one, Warren! Janice

Warren Doll
Date: 9/18/2018 4:42:00 PM

Janice, So glad that you liked it and thanks for your visit. ~Warren

Carole Duet

Date: 9/15/2018 10:01:00 AM

So simple and so delightful. I don't usually like haikus but this one is exceptional. I would never have imagined the water "tickling" a frog's belly. lol

Warren Doll
Date: 9/16/2018 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Carole. I'm very glad that you liked it ~Warren.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/13/2018 12:59:00 PM

A gem enjoyed the visual. love phyl

Warren Doll
Date: 9/14/2018 10:40:00 AM

Hi Phyllis, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for visiting ~Warren

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/13/2018 12:02:00 PM

Warren, you wowed me with this sweet, whimsical Haiku! Excellently written, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Warren Doll
Date: 9/14/2018 10:38:00 AM

Pandita, so good to hear from you. I'm glad you were wowed. Thanks for all of your positive comments and support. Sending hugs your way~ Warren

Silent One

Date: 9/12/2018 7:47:00 AM

Great imagery Warren..

Warren Doll
Date: 9/12/2018 4:54:00 PM

Thank you for your positive comment and visit, Silent One.

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/12/2018 4:26:00 AM

Now I know why they croak so fondly. Great work, Warren!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/12/2018 4:53:00 PM

Hi Joe, thanks for your visit and humorous comment and visit~Warren

Dean Wood

Date: 9/11/2018 11:50:00 AM

LOL, the image is killing me! Love it!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/12/2018 4:49:00 PM

Glad you liked it and that it made you laugh, Thanks~Warren

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/11/2018 3:32:00 AM

I want a frog belly now, you have made it sound utterly appealing, my friend!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 9:07:00 AM

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Caren. Thanks for stopping by ~ Warren:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/10/2018 6:25:00 PM

This is a great creation Warren. Cute! :)

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 9:04:00 AM

Hi Heidi, thanks for your positive comments. I'm glad that you liked it. ~ Warren:)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/10/2018 12:47:00 PM

What a cheerful haiku Warren!!! the little frogs are giggling just sweet and peaceful Happy Monday !!

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 9:01:00 AM

Thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Mike. Happy Tuesday ~Warren.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2018 12:31:00 AM

- A brilliant haiku, Warren ... loves the last line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:54:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, It's always so good to hear from you. Thanks for your visit and positive comments. Big hugs~ Warren:))

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/9/2018 10:16:00 PM

I love it! Tickled by it! A fave :)) xomo

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:50:00 AM

I'm so happy that you liked it, Maureen. I'm honored that you consider it a fav. ~Warren:))

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2018 9:18:00 PM

Oh, your imagery is just fantastic, Warren. I love the playful nature of your last line.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:45:00 AM

Hi Susan, I'm so glad that you liked it. Warmest wishes~Warren

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/9/2018 5:55:00 PM

Very creative visuals...I can see little bubbles settling on their stomach...All the best Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for your positive comments and visit, Arturo. All the best to you too.