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rain drops hit still pond
surface ripples spread outward
tickling frog bellies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/6/2019 9:22:00 PM
You paint a beautiful picture with your words.
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Warren Doll
Date: 2/13/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thanks very much, Valerie. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Date: 10/22/2018 1:54:00 PM
Unexpected ending. Calm, engaging lines. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Warren Doll
Date: 10/22/2018 3:59:00 PM
Sara, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your visit~ Warren
Date: 10/19/2018 2:49:00 PM
This poem tickled my belly. Thanks for the rain drop ripple ;)
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Warren Doll
Date: 10/20/2018 5:42:00 PM
So very glad that you liked it, P.M. ~ Warren :)
Date: 10/11/2018 7:11:00 PM
Brilliant, lovely imagery. Such a delight to read. FAV.
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Warren Doll
Date: 10/12/2018 6:20:00 PM
Bernard, thanks for your positive comments. I am glad that you enjoyed it and honored that you consider it a FAV, ~Warren
Date: 9/26/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your haiku Warren, the last line is excellent. :))
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/28/2018 8:05:00 AM
Roy, always enjoy hearing from you. I'm glad that you liked it and for your comments. :)) ~Warren
Date: 9/26/2018 12:42:00 PM
Really nice. I appreciate
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/28/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Anisha,
Date: 9/17/2018 4:15:00 PM
Good one, Warren! Janice
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/18/2018 4:42:00 PM
Janice, So glad that you liked it and thanks for your visit. ~Warren
Date: 9/16/2018 6:33:00 AM
So that's what makes them croak! Very nice imagery, Warren.
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/16/2018 9:25:00 AM
Jim, thanks so much~ Warren.
Date: 9/15/2018 10:01:00 AM
So simple and so delightful. I don't usually like haikus but this one is exceptional. I would never have imagined the water "tickling" a frog's belly. lol
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/16/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much for your positive comments and visit, Carole. I'm very glad that you liked it ~Warren.
Date: 9/13/2018 12:59:00 PM
A gem enjoyed the visual. love phyl
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/14/2018 10:40:00 AM
Hi Phyllis, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for visiting ~Warren
Date: 9/13/2018 12:02:00 PM
Warren, you wowed me with this sweet, whimsical Haiku! Excellently written, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/14/2018 10:38:00 AM
Pandita, so good to hear from you. I'm glad you were wowed. Thanks for all of your positive comments and support. Sending hugs your way~ Warren
Date: 9/12/2018 7:47:00 AM
Great imagery Warren..
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you for your positive comment and visit, Silent One.
Date: 9/12/2018 4:26:00 AM
Now I know why they croak so fondly. Great work, Warren!
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/12/2018 4:53:00 PM
Hi Joe, thanks for your visit and humorous comment and visit~Warren
Date: 9/11/2018 11:50:00 AM
LOL, the image is killing me! Love it!
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/12/2018 4:49:00 PM
Glad you liked it and that it made you laugh, Thanks~Warren
Date: 9/11/2018 3:32:00 AM
I want a frog belly now, you have made it sound utterly appealing, my friend!
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 9:07:00 AM
I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Caren. Thanks for stopping by ~ Warren:)
Date: 9/10/2018 6:25:00 PM
This is a great creation Warren. Cute! :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 9:04:00 AM
Hi Heidi, thanks for your positive comments. I'm glad that you liked it. ~ Warren:)
Date: 9/10/2018 12:47:00 PM
What a cheerful haiku Warren!!! the little frogs are giggling just sweet and peaceful Happy Monday !!
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Mike. Happy Tuesday ~Warren.
Date: 9/10/2018 12:31:00 AM
- A brilliant haiku, Warren ... loves the last line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:54:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, It's always so good to hear from you. Thanks for your visit and positive comments. Big hugs~ Warren:))
Date: 9/9/2018 10:16:00 PM
I love it! Tickled by it! A fave :)) xomo
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:50:00 AM
I'm so happy that you liked it, Maureen. I'm honored that you consider it a fav. ~Warren:))
Date: 9/9/2018 9:18:00 PM
Oh, your imagery is just fantastic, Warren. I love the playful nature of your last line.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:45:00 AM
Hi Susan, I'm so glad that you liked it. Warmest wishes~Warren
Date: 9/9/2018 5:55:00 PM
Very creative visuals...I can see little bubbles settling on their stomach...All the best Warren
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Warren Doll
Date: 9/11/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for your positive comments and visit, Arturo. All the best to you too.