Haiku

dawn a welcome bench fall dappled sun shadows you'll not sit alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pettit Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 4:12 PM
The song "Me and My Shadow" came to mind when I read this nice haiku.
Talbot Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:51 AM
I remember it well. 'Standing on the corner, me and my shadow'. Judy Garland 19**. Thanks, Robert. Mick
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:58 AM
I like the use of dappled! Clever, Mick!
Talbot Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:51 AM
Thank you kind Kim. Mick
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