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Haiku

dawn a welcome bench fall dappled sun shadows you'll not sit alone

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Date: 5/25/2018 4:12:00 PM
The song "Me and My Shadow" came to mind when I read this nice haiku.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/26/2018 1:51:00 AM
I remember it well. 'Standing on the corner, me and my shadow'. Judy Garland 19**. Thanks, Robert. Mick
Date: 5/25/2018 5:58:00 AM
I like the use of dappled! Clever, Mick!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/26/2018 1:51:00 AM
Thank you kind Kim. Mick

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