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Haiku

Crimson scenery
Evoking short and sweet write
Birth of a  Haiku.

May 20th,  2018

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Date: 6/3/2018 6:14:00 PM
Just beautiful as it captures the true essence of a haiku! Excellent piece, my dear friend! Hugs and blessings. Pandita
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Date: 6/4/2018 6:30:00 AM
Glad to read your praising feedback dear Pandita.. Always a delight and a great pleasure to embrace your warm visits and uplifting comments. Shine and stay blessed.
Date: 5/30/2018 5:36:00 PM
This one made me smile. I very much like your baby.
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Date: 5/30/2018 6:13:00 PM
A tremendous joy to have my write praised and valued by a beautiful mind and soul! Thank you so much once again for adding beauty to my write. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/25/2018 7:28:00 AM
I loved your innovative crafted poem which deals with how a Haiku is born in your mind Besma, and what's more, in perfect Japanese fashion. Definitely a FAVE from me my friend. Maria xxx
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:14:00 AM
Always an honour and a delight to embrace you dear Reader Poetess Marie.. Your kind and uplifting words add value to my humble write.. A writer is revived only in the presence of an avid insightful reader.. Thank you so much dear Maria. Stay tuned and blessed.
Date: 5/23/2018 3:39:00 PM
You do haiku very well... This is very clever
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Date: 5/24/2018 2:47:00 AM
Thank you Silent One for your appreciative comment. My pleasure. Stay safe.
Date: 5/22/2018 3:53:00 PM
Your beautiful mind is brilliant as well. How insightful and unique your haiku is, dear Besma. The heights of your intellect and the depths of your soul are reflected in the conception and birth of this creative haiku. Warmest wishes and love always.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/22/2018 4:09:00 PM
Too much on my humble words and soul dear Susan! You are showering upon me your love and generosity.. So graceful is your feedback.. I'm deeply elated and so much grateful dear. Shine and stay blessed as always.
Date: 5/22/2018 12:27:00 PM
Happy birthday, Haiku.
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Date: 5/22/2018 1:00:00 PM
My pleasure dear Pashang! Thank you for your visit and unique feedback. Stay safe.
Date: 5/21/2018 9:13:00 AM
It very well could be...All the best Besma
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Date: 5/21/2018 12:44:00 PM
I do appreciate your visit and valuable feedback Arturo. My pleasure, thank you so much. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/21/2018 6:30:00 AM
Short, sweet, and skillfully crafted! Great work, Besma.
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:36:00 AM
A sweet and elating feedback. A joy to read your application dear Vijay! Thank you so much. Stay tuned and blessed.
Date: 5/21/2018 6:27:00 AM
A sweet poem, Besma.
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:33:00 AM
Dear Line my honour and pleasure! Thank you a bunch. Stay bright and blessed.
Date: 5/21/2018 5:44:00 AM
Brilliant!
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:30:00 AM
I do appreciate your visit Yazmin. Deeply humbled. Thank you so much. Stay safe.
Date: 5/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
Your haiku...although short and sweet expands the senses...love and light Besma...^WW^
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:28:00 AM
Your praise to my write adds value to it! I do appreciate your uplifting feedback Winged Warrior. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/21/2018 3:46:00 AM
Straight to the heart of a hakiu, Beautifully done Besma. Tom
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Date: 5/21/2018 4:24:00 AM
It is my honour to read your evaluating comment. I highly value your appreciation. You outshine in Haiku! and in the other forms of beauties.. Thank you so much Tom. Stay safe.
Date: 5/21/2018 3:06:00 AM
Brilliant! Evoking wonder dear, Besma!
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Date: 5/21/2018 3:10:00 AM
My pleasure and honour coming from you dear Demetrios! I'm glad you liked my humble write. Stay safe always.