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Haiku

Crimson scenery
Evoking short and sweet write
Birth of a  Haiku.

May 20th,  2018

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Pandita Sietesantos

June 3, 2018 at 6:14 PM

Just beautiful as it captures the true essence of a haiku! Excellent piece, my dear friend! Hugs and blessings. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 4, 2018 at 6:30 AM

Glad to read your praising feedback dear Pandita.. Always a delight and a great pleasure to embrace your warm visits and uplifting comments. Shine and stay blessed.

Richard Lamoureux

May 30, 2018 at 5:36 PM

This one made me smile. I very much like your baby.

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 30, 2018 at 6:13 PM

A tremendous joy to have my write praised and valued by a beautiful mind and soul! Thank you so much once again for adding beauty to my write. Stay blessed.

Maria Williams

May 25, 2018 at 7:28 AM

I loved your innovative crafted poem which deals with how a Haiku is born in your mind Besma, and what's more, in perfect Japanese fashion. Definitely a FAVE from me my friend. Maria xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 25, 2018 at 11:14 AM

Always an honour and a delight to embrace you dear Reader Poetess Marie.. Your kind and uplifting words add value to my humble write.. A writer is revived only in the presence of an avid insightful reader.. Thank you so much dear Maria. Stay tuned and blessed.

Silent One

May 23, 2018 at 3:39 PM

You do haiku very well... This is very clever

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 24, 2018 at 2:47 AM

Thank you Silent One for your appreciative comment. My pleasure. Stay safe.

Susan Ashley

May 22, 2018 at 3:53 PM

Your beautiful mind is brilliant as well. How insightful and unique your haiku is, dear Besma. The heights of your intellect and the depths of your soul are reflected in the conception and birth of this creative haiku. Warmest wishes and love always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 22, 2018 at 4:09 PM

Too much on my humble words and soul dear Susan! You are showering upon me your love and generosity.. So graceful is your feedback.. I'm deeply elated and so much grateful dear. Shine and stay blessed as always.

Pashang Salehi

May 22, 2018 at 12:27 PM

Happy birthday, Haiku.

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 22, 2018 at 1:00 PM

My pleasure dear Pashang! Thank you for your visit and unique feedback. Stay safe.

Arturo Michael

May 21, 2018 at 9:13 AM

It very well could be...All the best Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 21, 2018 at 12:44 PM

I do appreciate your visit and valuable feedback Arturo. My pleasure, thank you so much. Stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit

May 21, 2018 at 6:30 AM

Short, sweet, and skillfully crafted! Great work, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 21, 2018 at 7:36 AM

A sweet and elating feedback. A joy to read your application dear Vijay! Thank you so much. Stay tuned and blessed.

Line Gauthier

May 21, 2018 at 6:27 AM

A sweet poem, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 21, 2018 at 7:33 AM

Dear Line my honour and pleasure! Thank you a bunch. Stay bright and blessed.

Yazmin Malik

May 21, 2018 at 5:44 AM

Brilliant!

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 21, 2018 at 7:30 AM

I do appreciate your visit Yazmin. Deeply humbled. Thank you so much. Stay safe.

Winged Warrior

May 21, 2018 at 5:39 AM

Your haiku...although short and sweet expands the senses...love and light Besma...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 21, 2018 at 7:28 AM

Your praise to my write adds value to it! I do appreciate your uplifting feedback Winged Warrior. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.

Tom Cunningham

May 21, 2018 at 3:46 AM

Straight to the heart of a hakiu, Beautifully done Besma. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 21, 2018 at 4:24 AM

It is my honour to read your evaluating comment. I highly value your appreciation. You outshine in Haiku! and in the other forms of beauties.. Thank you so much Tom. Stay safe.