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sun showers a sweltering city steamy pavement gasps ©5/16/2018

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Date: 6/5/2018 8:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John. Well penned.
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Date: 6/5/2018 6:33:00 AM
Wonderfully written, haiku!
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Date: 6/3/2018 5:16:00 PM
great personification of the pavement! Congrats in the contest, John.
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Date: 6/3/2018 12:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest. Well done!
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Date: 6/2/2018 7:08:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/16/2018 9:23:00 PM
Such a unique and creative angle, penned with a sharp, poetic pen! Great haiku, John :)
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Date: 5/16/2018 9:23:00 PM
Ps. A fave!
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:52:00 AM
Well done! Great Haiku :)
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:19:00 AM
Oh I love this!! A fave :) xomo!
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