Haiku

smoking barbecues
cannonballs and dips in pools
baseball games to view




5-14-18

funsummerhaiku

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 8:01:00 AM

Sounds like a surreal hangout or potluck gathering. So nice!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/28/2018 8:21:00 AM

Surreal because people don't get oudoor's much anymore like they used to lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit JW; really appreciate it!~Che :)

Anil Deo

Date: 5/26/2018 8:03:00 PM

Just in time (for my reading) - for Memorial Day cookouts! Memories past and forever. shalom, shalom Che

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/26/2018 8:23:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anil; hope you have a wonderful Memorial Day tomorrow! Shalom shalom to you too!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2018 8:02:00 AM

Second line’s my favorite!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/24/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; really appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf

Date: 5/23/2018 7:53:00 AM

Cheryl, this epitomizes summer, best of luck in the contest. John

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/24/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)

Chris Hagy

Date: 5/17/2018 3:36:00 PM

In the good old summer time!...gotta love it!...sweet write :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/17/2018 8:10:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Chris; appreciate it!~Che :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 5/16/2018 9:29:00 PM

Nice!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/17/2018 8:09:00 PM

Thanks for nice comment and visit Mike!~Che :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/14/2018 7:30:00 AM

This is a fun Haiku. I enjoyed. Well written Cheryl :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/15/2018 8:19:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Heidi; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2018 1:24:00 AM

Great hakiu Cheryl, it can't come quick enough. Tom.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/14/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; I couldn't agree with you more about summer getting here quickly!~Che :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/13/2018 10:11:00 PM

Summertime, and the living is easy.. and a lot of fun too! An awesome vibe to your summer haiku, Cheryl. Love it and can't wait :)) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 5/14/2018 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan; glad you got good vibes from my summer haiku! Warmest wishes to you too~Che :)

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