Haiku

smoking barbecues
cannonballs and dips in pools
baseball games to view




5-14-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Sounds like a surreal hangout or potluck gathering. So nice!
Hoffman Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Surreal because people don't get oudoor's much anymore like they used to lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit JW; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Deo Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Just in time (for my reading) - for Memorial Day cookouts! Memories past and forever. shalom, shalom Che
Hoffman Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Anil; hope you have a wonderful Memorial Day tomorrow! Shalom shalom to you too!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Second line’s my favorite!
Hoffman Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Kim; really appreciate it!~Che :)
Gondolf Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Cheryl, this epitomizes summer, best of luck in the contest. John
Hoffman Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; appreciate the encouragement!~Che :)
Hagy Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 3:36 PM
In the good old summer time!...gotta love it!...sweet write :)
Hoffman Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 8:10 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Chris; appreciate it!~Che :)
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May 16, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Nice!
Hoffman Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Thanks for nice comment and visit Mike!~Che :)
Sands Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:30 AM
This is a fun Haiku. I enjoyed. Well written Cheryl :)
Hoffman Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Heidi; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 1:24 AM
Great hakiu Cheryl, it can't come quick enough. Tom.
Hoffman Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Tom; I couldn't agree with you more about summer getting here quickly!~Che :)
Ashley Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Summertime, and the living is easy.. and a lot of fun too! An awesome vibe to your summer haiku, Cheryl. Love it and can't wait :)) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hoffman Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Susan; glad you got good vibes from my summer haiku! Warmest wishes to you too~Che :)
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