Haiku

haiku

on moonlit ocean
whales dive into silver waves - 
exploding harpoons 
 
 
05-07-2018

Contest:       Haiga/Haiku  - Theme The Sea/Ocean 5-7-5
Sponsor:      Mick Talbot
Placement:   2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Doll Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 6:42 AM
Pandita, a sad but wonderfully written haiku. Awesome imagery~ Warren
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 8:15 AM
How sad. Put true.
Sietesantos Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Hi Allen, thank you for visiting and leaving me your response! Best wishes. Pandita
Chakrabarty Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Oh the picture...think that...allow me to say It's souper great. Regards>rajat
Sietesantos Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Hi Rajat, I very much appreciate your nice compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:05 PM
a well deserved win, Pandita and one of my favorites on the list. Congrats.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Dear Andie, thank you my friend for your support and kind comments which I appreciate! Hugs. Pandita
Flower Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 1:53 AM
Congratulations, Pandita! :)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Hi Moon Flower, I very much appreciate your nice compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:19 PM
All seems calm...but it’s only an illusion! Great and congrats!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Hi Kim, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Hugs. Pandita
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Pandita:-) hugs Jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Thank you so much my sweet friend! I wish you a wonderful Mother's Day with love, hugs, and many blessings! Pandita
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Sharp ink Pandita! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Hi Maureen, thank you for visiting and thank you for your kind complimentary words, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Back with congratulations on your great win, ... eve
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you - thank you, my dear friend! I wish you a most happy Mother's Day! Blessings, hugs, and most of all - love! Pandita
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:32 AM
- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Pandita :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Have a great weekend and hugs. Pandita
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations Pandita. Tom
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Many thanks, Tom! Hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Pandita. Well done.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you - thank you! Hugs. Pandita
Deo Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:23 PM
the last line has the classic "haiku surprise." Great painting ... shalom, shanthi Om
Sietesantos Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Hi Anil, thank you so very much for your kind complimentary words, my friend! I always find haiku writing to be very challenging; therefore, before I pen any haiku, I do review haiku written by the masters for guidance on the principles, especially about "haiku surprise." Have a very nice day! Pandita
Salehi Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Sad but true. ...
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:40 PM
Dear Pashang, thank you my friend for your support and kind comments which I appreciate! Hugs. Pandita
Sharma Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Nice
Sharma Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Yes its nice actually I see recently your work thanks for your reply have a good day Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Hi Kishan, I very much appreciate your nice compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita
Y. Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Hi Pandita, In a few words you painted such a heartfelt picture. Well done:-)Alexis
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:16 PM
Thank you so much, my friend, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment and continued support for my work. Hugs. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Pandita. this one is simply brilliant! Wow.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Hi Andie, I greatly appreciate your wonderful superlative compliment! Thank you so much! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
Faulkner Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Whales are beautiful and should be protected - thank you for your stirring and necessary message-
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Hi Michelle, thank you for visiting and thank you for your kind complimentary words, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita
Turner Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 2:39 PM
I actually thought killing whales had been outlawed. If not, it ought to be. Sad poem, Pandita. Nice to see you again:)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, dear Daniel, for commenting on this piece! You are right - the International Whaling Commission banned commercial whaling over 30 years ago; but there are countries such as Iceland, Japan, and Norway (they use harpoon grenades that are supposed to kill whales "efficiently") that still support commercial whaling and seek to lift the ban. Have a good evening, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Cunningham Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Such a sad finish for these beautiful creatures Pandita, you've created a beautiful image though. Tom.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 2:05 PM
It is so sad indeed that too many of these creatures end in a horrible way! Thank you Tom for visiting and commenting on this piece! Have a great day! Pandita
Roper Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Wow, I love your written art, Pandita, very well said..
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:31 PM
My dear Eve, thank you so very much for your superlative compliments! Blessings and hugs, my friend! Pandita
Allison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Oh that final line is so so sad Pandita - man has so much to answer for:-( hugs jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Truly, my friend, - sometimes, unfortunately, we take one step forward and a couple backwards! Many people have no empathy for animals. Thank you for your kind comments, dear Jan. Love and hugs. Pandita
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May 7, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Oh I hope not harpoons. Wow u picture it so imaginatively. Beautiful haiku. Nice to read from u again, Pleez do write your thoughts/comment on my newest poem if u can relate and all.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Zaynab, I appreciate your kind complimentary words, my friend! It is so appalling that in this day and age when there is so much outcry about taking care of the Earth and our natural resources, and there are still some people who continue to hunt whales and other endangered species for various reasons including profit and sport. It has to stop! Best regards! Pandita
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