Haiku

Wet driftwood Bleached out by the sun Beach diamond

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Deb Radke

Date: 11/2/2018 10:11:00 AM

I can see it shimmering. You’ve written a perfect picture. Beautiful haiku. My best. Deb

Warren Doll
Date: 11/26/2018 1:39:00 PM

I'm glad that you liked it ,Deb. Thanks so much for your comments and support~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2018 4:59:00 PM

lovely imagery Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 5/9/2018 8:14:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Jan. Thank You!

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/5/2018 9:35:00 AM

Beautiful image!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/5/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thanks for your positive comment, Joe

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/5/2018 8:15:00 AM

Warren, I think this is excellent, I especially love the "Beach diamond" Well Done,!!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/5/2018 4:01:00 PM

Glad that you liked it so much, Mike. Thank You!