Haiku

roots wings swings offspring sprinkling seeds weaving time 27th April 2018

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/28/2018 11:34:00 PM

One of the best haikus I've read!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/29/2018 1:24:00 AM

Thank you Juliet. That is a great compliment. Many wishes, Kai

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2018 2:28:00 PM

You've created a delightful image, Kai. It's uplifting to think of trees as homes for our birds and as supporters of swings for children to enjoy. Well done! (I think Mick wants only three syllables in the last line.) Wishing you success, Carolyn

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/29/2018 1:26:00 AM

Thank you fot your praise and for your help with the syllables. Many wishes, Kai

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/28/2018 10:41:00 AM

Wonderful imagery Kai, a joy to read! xomo

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/29/2018 1:23:00 AM

Thank you Maureen.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/28/2018 7:04:00 AM

I enjoyed the tapestry of your poem.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/28/2018 6:23:00 AM

Lovely, Kai.