Haiku

brain food... school of fish fish out of water... dead fish off the hook... go fish April 18, 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 4/21/2018 3:18:00 PM

Lol... you're on a roll.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/21/2018 10:52:00 PM

And I'll taste even better on a croissant. :) gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/20/2018 8:47:00 AM

You forgot "sleeping with the fishes," "plenty of fish in the sea," and my personal favorite "one fish two fish red fish blue fish" - but great haiku, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/20/2018 12:46:00 PM

'Great minds think alike,' as they say. I actually considered the 2nd and 3rd expressions you mentioned before deciding on what was included in the haiku. Glad you felt that the haiku still had merit though. Thank you, Michelle, as always. :) gw

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/18/2018 10:48:00 PM

Back to back wonderful Haiku poems.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/19/2018 9:36:00 AM

Hey, P.M.R., thank you for visiting my site and checking out the Haikus. Hope you found them as-easy-to-read as 'shooting fish in a barrel!' Thanks again! Best wishes, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/18/2018 6:16:00 AM

You are so much fun Gershon! Jolly good haiku :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/18/2018 8:31:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen, and glad to hear it! As for the poem, maybe not-so-great, eh? It was a 3:00 a.m. job. Couldn't sleep. Winter's icy fingers...Bwa-ha-ha-. :) gw