Haiku

brain food... school of fish
  fish out of water... dead fish
     off the hook... go fish  

           April 18, 2018
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Gentry Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Lol... you're on a roll.
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 10:52 PM
And I'll taste even better on a croissant. :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:47 AM
You forgot "sleeping with the fishes," "plenty of fish in the sea," and my personal favorite "one fish two fish red fish blue fish" - but great haiku, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 12:46 PM
'Great minds think alike,' as they say. I actually considered the 2nd and 3rd expressions you mentioned before deciding on what was included in the haiku. Glad you felt that the haiku still had merit though. Thank you, Michelle, as always. :) gw
Marc Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Back to back wonderful Haiku poems.
Wolf Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Hey, P.M.R., thank you for visiting my site and checking out the Haikus. Hope you found them as-easy-to-read as 'shooting fish in a barrel!' Thanks again! Best wishes, Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 6:16 AM
You are so much fun Gershon! Jolly good haiku :)
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Thanks, Maureen, and glad to hear it! As for the poem, maybe not-so-great, eh? It was a 3:00 a.m. job. Couldn't sleep. Winter's icy fingers...Bwa-ha-ha-. :) gw
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