Haiku

rain pellets ripple cat's whiskers swims in hideout boat moves overhead 4/17/2018

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Moon Flower

Date: 4/25/2018 1:46:00 AM

I think this ku is cute. Yeah, it is. And I like the thoughts in general. ;) Congrats, Eve.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/23/2018 10:17:00 PM

Congrats, Eve, on making the list.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/23/2018 5:11:00 PM

Intriguing idea, Eve. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2018 2:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 5st place in the haiku contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/23/2018 12:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Great imagery here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2018 6:34:00 PM

oh, I love those cat whiskers. Those fish really do look a bit like cats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2018 1:56:00 PM

- A good one, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)