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western sunset streaks rings of gold across the yard dark stands waiting east 3/9/18 Haiku - Poetry Contest Sponsored by The Poet Doctor

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/13/2018 3:05:00 AM

True and balanced. Great. Many wishes, Kai

Jean Murray

Date: 3/12/2018 2:35:00 AM

A storm brewing for sure. Congratulations Janis.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2018 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2018 7:16:00 PM

Thanks Eve.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2018 4:33:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery Sian, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2018 7:17:00 PM

Thanks and blessings Jan.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/10/2018 3:39:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Sian. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2018 7:17:00 PM

Thanks Line.

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/10/2018 2:33:00 PM

I'm there in there in your yard, in awe of the sunset knowing darkness is standing in the East, waiting. A huge vista! Congratulations Sian on your 2nd place, many thanks for you support... Mick

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2018 7:17:00 PM

Both contests were quite an inspiration. Thanks for the placement.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2018 8:51:00 PM

Ok, I just sent you a soupmail. I wish I had come here first. Seeing your picture, I recall you now!! I visit so many poets here, I can't keep names straight in my head. I like this haiku of yours very much!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2018 7:18:00 PM

Andrea, it's me. Janis.

John Lawless

Date: 3/9/2018 8:39:00 PM

oh, this bids .... stop....and gaze into the darkness.....well done Sian

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/10/2018 7:18:00 PM

Thanks John.