Haiku 1-5-2017

HAIKU 1/5/2017 barriers of stone bear the wrath of time’s beauty chiseled countenance John G. Lawless 1/5/2017

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Rainbow Promise

Date: 1/10/2017 9:55:00 PM

Reminds me of the saying "Its not carved in stone." The "wrath of time's beauty" , an image of either water or wind erosion. Enjoyed. Rainbow.

Doug Vinson

Date: 1/6/2017 7:42:00 PM

Erosion - the master sculptor. Right on, John, good stuff.

John Lawless
Date: 1/7/2017 6:46:00 AM

Hey Doug, thanks for stopping to read and comment. I have come to marvel at the "beauty" that that "Great Sculptor" creates through the natural world.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2017 4:18:00 PM

rocks awash by nature create new shapes, hopefully not deformed... so well crafted, john.. huggs

John Lawless
Date: 1/6/2017 7:06:00 PM

Thanks Nette, always nice to hear from you.