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Haiku 02

snowflakes
frozen on the ground...
ice skaters by the door

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Robert Pettit

February 6, 2012 at 12:07 PM

Good write. I hope it gets warm enough so nobody will have to skate once they get through the door.

Phyllis Babcock

February 7, 2012 at 9:51 AM

thanks

Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2012 at 11:26 AM

Also enjoyable. At first I read it as "ice skates by the door" and that would work too!

Phyllis Babcock

February 7, 2012 at 9:52 AM

that would work also

John Loving Iii

February 1, 2012 at 10:46 AM

i get the sence that someones going to slip

Phyllis Babcock

February 7, 2012 at 9:52 AM

yeah lots of ice this winter but hardly any snow which is nice

Shirley Long

January 31, 2012 at 1:58 PM

Good poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Phyllis Babcock

February 7, 2012 at 9:52 AM

thank you

Lucinda Cayton

January 31, 2012 at 12:03 PM

:) smiling poetry I do like. Loved reading this. Cindy (otherwise known to the general public as Lucinda)

Phyllis Babcock

February 7, 2012 at 9:53 AM

thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2012 at 11:32 AM

02:once again Good,wery good!oxox love Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock

February 7, 2012 at 9:53 AM

thanks

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