Haiku 02

snowflakes frozen on the ground... ice skaters by the door

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Date: 2/6/2012 12:07:00 PM

Good write. I hope it gets warm enough so nobody will have to skate once they get through the door.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:51:00 AM

thanks

Date: 2/3/2012 11:26:00 AM

Also enjoyable. At first I read it as "ice skates by the door" and that would work too!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:52:00 AM

that would work also

Date: 2/1/2012 10:46:00 AM

i get the sence that someones going to slip

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:52:00 AM

yeah lots of ice this winter but hardly any snow which is nice

Date: 1/31/2012 1:58:00 PM

Good poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:52:00 AM

thank you

Date: 1/31/2012 12:03:00 PM

:) smiling poetry I do like. Loved reading this. Cindy (otherwise known to the general public as Lucinda)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:53:00 AM

thanks

Date: 1/31/2012 11:32:00 AM

02:once again Good,wery good!oxox love Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:53:00 AM

thanks