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vibrating bird wings jabbered song birds at hummer.... katydids echo Written: August 11, 2018

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2018 12:40:00 PM

Lovely imagery Sara, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/24/2018 9:16:00 AM

Jan, Thanks for the visit to give congrats. Sara

Mark Toney

Date: 9/17/2018 9:34:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your win with your expressive haiku! I love your use of "vibrating," "jabbered" and "echo."

Mark Toney
Date: 9/19/2018 2:53:00 PM

I know, right? I visited a friend who had humming bird feeders lining the front porch. As I stepped up to the porch approaching the front door I didn’t realize the porch was filled with humming birds. Surrounded by the humming and the birds darting I felt like I was in Alfred Hitchcock’s “The Birds!”

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2018 9:17:00 AM

Mark, Thanks for dropping by with congrats on my work. Those hummers sound like a very large bird when they swoop in and those wings vibrate. Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/17/2018 8:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/18/2018 10:07:00 AM

Line, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2018 7:54:00 PM

Great Haiku, Sara, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Jack Horne

Date: 8/18/2018 10:27:00 AM

clever write here, my friend - I have to admit, I couldn't understand what to do for Harry's Captcha contest...LOL

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/12/2018 3:26:00 PM

Nice haiku - you stuck to 5 7 5 which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2018 11:16:00 AM

Matthew, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 8/11/2018 6:34:00 PM

Well written verse, Sara, and best for a win. I saw a hummingbird at the park today and it flew so fast it disappeared. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2018 11:16:00 AM

Eve, Yes, those hummers have the speed and can escape in a heartbeat. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2018 6:22:00 PM

great job, Sara. Love that last line especially

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2018 11:18:00 AM

Andrea, We don't see or hear katydids here very much but there sounds at to a summer day. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sand Blown

Date: 8/11/2018 8:22:00 AM

percept-words....striking effect

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/11/2018 9:11:00 AM

SB, Your presence at my work is uplifting. Glad that you saw the striking effect. Sara