Haiku - Tree

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Tree, Willow, Nature, Green, Park, Spring, Branches

a green veil cascades and branches sway in the wind ... spider web glistens _________________ January 13, 2022 Poetry/Haiku/tree Copyright Protected, ID 01-1421-403-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Strand (1051) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/14/2022 First Place

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Kim Merryman

Date: 1/14/2022 2:44:00 PM

Constance, you painted a vivid image with your haiku! Beautiful! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:32:00 PM

Kim, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/13/2022 9:50:00 PM

Constance, Though I am not fond of spiders getting anywhere near me I sure do appreciate the beauty of their webs especially when it rains. A lovely haiku my friend. Blessings xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:34:00 PM

Connie, thank you so much for the comment and compliment. I never liked spiders until I found one living in my garden bucket, I called him George, he worked very hard on his webs every day for months but sadly drowned in a summer rain storm ~ friendship and poetry_Constance