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Inspired by Jan Allison:
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HAIKU
oft my morning call... 
birds in the warmer months... sing... 
my natural alarm... 

your haiku on my shoulder... 
your blackbird... softly chirps... 
morning... 

SENRYU
inspirational... 
your poetic prowess... 
many thank yous'...

HAIKU
orange beaked blackbird...
 dawns equivalent nightingale
 sing on Jenny wren 
 
SENRYU
inspirational
a haiku your talent paints 
Jan a great poet

inspired mine... 
I thank you... 
write on dear poet
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Inspired by Robert Haige?
HAIKU
crystal clear... 
poets palette... winter hues... 
frosted window panes
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Inspired by Sarah Rosen
HAIKU
 our closest star... 
sol... it has a lifespan... 
earth will die with it... 

our planet's lifespan... 
once under natures control... 
pollution now rules... 
 
earth will die with it... 
sol will blow us all away...
 climate change preempts... 
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Inspired by Robert Haigh
HAIKU
live love to find one... 
who lives love too... together... 
true love realised...

Copyright © Mick Talbot | Year Posted 2018

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Jan Allison Date: 3/3/2018 12:48:00 PM Wow Mick your poetic talents shines with every line. I am honoured to be included in your poem. Adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mick Talbot Date: 3/3/2018 1:20:00 PM Jan, Thanks on all counts... hugs Mick

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/3/2018 3:05:00 AM So many gems strung together gleam with your talent Mick. I thoroughly enjoyed each and everyone! : ) Login to Reply Mick Talbot Date: 3/3/2018 3:24:00 AM Connie, Your too kind, many thanks... Mick