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Haiku - Inspired By Jan Allison

DEATH SO FINAL ~~~~~~~~~~~ death... so final makes one feel inadequate life moves on war graves they died for what... world war three... Trump... be ashamed...

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/18/2018 8:56:00 PM

Oh sharp ink! Fantastic xomo

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/18/2018 10:55:00 PM

Thanks Maureen, appreciated! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2018 7:19:00 PM

I sure do hope your prediction does not come true. But it truly is a scary world and all the world's eyes are on us. It's so sweet that Jan inspired you. She is a wonder.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2018 4:10:00 AM

oh heck I'm blushing here thanks guys:-) hugs jan xx

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/18/2018 11:09:00 PM

True, the countries of the world all focused on Trump and pooing their pants. As for the prediction bit, no, a question, yes, its so sad that it has to be asked at all. Jan, hmm, she doesn't know it yet for she has become my muse. All poetry inspires me to write but Jan's tells, inspires me to write on a topic, something there that fires my imagination. Yes, she is a wonder! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/18/2018 6:29:00 PM

aww thanks Mick I am honoured that I inspired you with my morning or mourning poem:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2018 4:12:00 AM

Your reply has made my day thanks so much Mick. I get inspired by some amazing poets here - I worry about being your muse lol because I sincerely worry about mine as she can write on such diverse topics lol:-) I wonder if the one i post later today will inspire you to write lol lol lol!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/18/2018 11:22:00 PM

Haha, it is my pleasure to inform you that you have become my Poetry Soup muse. Your amazing poetry is like a spark, often just your titles inspire me to read, then that rapturous explosion in my mind, to write! Forever in your debt, Mick... :-)