Haiku - Four Seasons

Orange lilies sway

Swollen wood fence leaning drenched

First summers storm over

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Cold autumn breeze blows

Bell ringing in the distance

Red leaves slow dancing

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Tree branch barren home

Red oak acorns deep

Squirrels huddle for warmth

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Ice soon melts new day

Gray chair with no color creaks

Sunshine breaths new life

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Written by : Corrina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/22/2015 12:23:00 PM
Magnificent haikus - beautifully telling the story of each season! Well done, Corrina! I rate this a solid "7!" Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 5/17/2015 10:02:00 AM
Corrina, amazing imagery in every haiku. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/12/2015 12:45:00 PM
- Beautiful gems for four seasons, Corrina :) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 10:23:00 PM
Such kindness here in the soup, thank you again Anne Lise Hugz back!
Date: 5/12/2015 5:52:00 AM
This is a lovely set of haiku, Corrina! Mother and son collaboration gives it a new dimension. All the best. // paul
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Paul, I am blessed that both my teen sons find comfort in poetry as I do. Thank you for your nice comment!
Date: 5/11/2015 11:24:00 AM
Delightful string of haiku with lovely imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 9:45:00 AM
Jan I wish I could, Ill pull his ear a little :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/11/2015 12:20:00 PM
wow get him posting on here too! Hugs jan xx
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/11/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thank you Jan, my son (who was 15 at the time) and I wrote this together. :)
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