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haiku - dawn

golden sunny dawn butterflies kiss jinias  hummingbirds whistle Dawn: At dawn, spending unlimited time in my garden, which is a refuge for reflections, solitude and introspection, is the best jouissance life can bring. I am mesmerized with the way the butterflies, flowers and birds nurture our creative souls.  August 4, 2020 "Traditional Haiku" - Nature Themed Premier Contest Sponsor: Tanis Kitchin

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Date: 8/10/2020 7:36:00 AM
Your garden sounds magnificent Mala! Congratulations for your win! xomo
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/10/2020 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Friend. Imagination added to reality! Love Xx Mala
Date: 8/8/2020 1:04:00 PM
Superb imagery malabika many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/9/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Haiku Poems are great vehicles for expressing beauty in few words! Hugs, Mala
Date: 8/8/2020 12:34:00 PM
this is superb. I can imagine the beauty you have penned.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/9/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne. Haikus are great to express beauty in few words!
Date: 8/8/2020 9:50:00 AM
a beautiful scene. If I were the meditative type, for me this would be the best place just to sit and watch nature!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/8/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. You are right - I am a bit of meditative type. In summer, I spend a lot of time in the backyard writing or painting.
Date: 8/8/2020 6:30:00 AM
Hummingbirds whistling at dawn..that's such a lively scene Mala. Congratulations on your win for this beautiful one :) Love :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/8/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thanks, Aditi. I live in Canada, Canadian natural beauty is really spectacular! I spend most of my mornings in summer in the backyard, writing or painting. Love, Mala
Date: 8/7/2020 6:54:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/8/2020 5:42:00 AM
Thank you, Mark. Glad you liked the imagery. Appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 8/7/2020 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations Mala! Your haiku so eloquently invites us to share both dawn and the sunrise with you in your garden. Just lovely. Congratulations my friend!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/7/2020 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam. To me, dawn and sunrise are precious moments of nature! Appreciate your lovely comments.
Date: 8/7/2020 4:16:00 AM
Malabika, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/7/2020 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tania. Appreciate your kind comments. Love, Mala
Date: 8/5/2020 3:22:00 AM
- A beautiful haiku, Malabika :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. Appreciate your kind comments. Love and best wishes, Mala