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Haiku - Cloud

lone radiant white cauliflower cumulus~ lightning dance within 8-3-2020 8/2/2020 in the evening, still daylight against a blue sky, stood at a distance a lone billowing cloud, radiant lighting flashing within; it was just stunning.

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Date: 8/15/2020 3:16:00 AM
Read it and become amazed such a beauty of the words...congrat salute alkas
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Date: 8/11/2020 9:03:00 PM
A gem very creative. love phyl
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Date: 8/6/2020 8:30:00 AM
Creative way to go for the contest. Sara
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:15:00 AM
- Stunning haiku, Eve :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/4/2020 2:07:00 PM
Ooh! Dramatic...
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:29:00 PM
Wow,"cauliflower cumulus"...mine was a cotton candy cumulus days ago;-) Extraordinary comparison..!! I loved this one very much..I enjoyed the imagery dear Eve mam:-)My Best wishes for you in the contest.Have a lovely day.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/4/2020 8:08:00 AM
Great imagery to win a Contest. Best to you Pangie xx
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Date: 8/4/2020 5:57:00 AM
An enigmatic vision! That would be fascinating to see. Marvellous haiku. My best to you in the contest! xomo
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Date: 8/4/2020 1:31:00 AM
Beautiful image Eve, I always look for images in the clouds. Good luck Tom
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Date: 8/3/2020 6:49:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Eve. Wow. Love this one a favorite...
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Date: 8/3/2020 6:15:00 PM
I love the way you equated cauliflower with clouds.
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