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Haiku - 9

lunar crescents glow lighting nearby placid pond skinny dippers splash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/11/2017 9:58:00 PM
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Nice, can I have directions? :)
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Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 2/11/2017 8:31:00 AM
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The moon came over the mountain//caught 'em in the act//do it in the daylight//oglers they'd attract!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/11/2017 6:08:00 AM
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the last line was a greeat twist, tim.. like your 'ku!..huggs
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Carol B.
Date: 2/10/2017 11:03:00 PM
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I really like this playful and romantic image.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/10/2017 9:15:00 PM
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Cool image!! Especially the last line!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/10/2017 3:58:00 PM
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and you've got night vision binoculars, right:) You draw a very clear picture, Tim:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/10/2017 3:36:00 PM
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- Lovely haiku, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 2/10/2017 3:19:00 PM
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This should be entitled "hide-ku" thanks for the chuckle
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Darren White
Date: 2/10/2017 2:00:00 PM
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wow, lovely haiku. Skinny dipping this time of year, and then warm towels and hot chocolate :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 2/10/2017 1:51:00 PM
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I'm just smiling as I'm reading this because it's so cute wishful thinking...I love it :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/10/2017 1:56:00 PM
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Hey, we need to dream to get through winter's grip : )
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/10/2017 1:33:00 PM
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this is lovely, tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/10/2017 1:37:00 PM
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Thank you Ilene...I'm sure you're longing for warmth to melt the snow.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/10/2017 1:27:00 PM
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Excellent Haiku. .I so love this.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/10/2017 1:33:00 PM
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Thanks Charma...now we just need a little warmth : ) I'm dreaming of some...
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2017 1:19:00 PM
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love the imagery Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/10/2017 1:26:00 PM
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Thanks Jan

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