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haiku - 7

under crimson glow frost blankets a hidden glen chapped lips are licked

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/29/2016 5:33:00 PM
Nicely done my friend -- just be careful not to touch your tongue to the steel post!!
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Date: 11/4/2016 6:57:00 PM
I like Jean's query. Was it by you or another?? Nice one, Tim!
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Date: 11/4/2016 4:20:00 PM
By who?
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Date: 11/3/2016 2:42:00 PM
It seems a cross between a Haiku and Senryu, chapped lips aren't about nature, or are they? :) Pass the lip balm...
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Date: 11/3/2016 6:50:00 AM
Beautifully done, I can feel winter in your words.
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Date: 11/2/2016 7:44:00 PM
Superbly written, my friend, Tim!
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Date: 11/2/2016 6:11:00 PM
Beautiful verse Tim!
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Date: 11/2/2016 6:05:00 PM
wonderful haiku Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2016 5:53:00 PM
Fantastic Haiku..A fave.
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