Haiku...No Title

across the rolling hills wind ripples green grass blankets serene ocean waves For the haiku contest.

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Date: 6/8/2010 8:35:00 PM

Completely love your description of your second line! Brilliant, I think. Congratulations on placing in this Haiku You contest!

Date: 6/2/2010 3:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Date: 6/2/2010 2:31:00 PM

congrats on your fine placement in my contest~Rick

Date: 6/2/2010 2:24:00 AM

ocean fields, awesome harry

Date: 6/1/2010 10:32:00 PM

A perfect haiku with apt images to express the thought

Date: 6/1/2010 4:16:00 PM

Nice analogy and interesting imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that pen flowing! Karen

Date: 6/1/2010 1:46:00 PM

Wonderful imagery with this one, Barbara! Luv, Andrea

Date: 6/1/2010 10:17:00 AM

i can feel the breeze, see the grass bend ... thank you , chuck

Date: 6/1/2010 9:47:00 AM

Very nice and...serene! Makes for an excellent visual.

Date: 6/1/2010 9:14:00 AM

Lovely haiku, grass does ripple like water doesn't it! Excellent imagery.

Date: 6/1/2010 8:33:00 AM

Nice job of comparison. Great image. Love, daver