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Haiku- Morning Sun

Morning sun brings warmth to cold faces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/11/2012 12:31:00 AM
Sure love the sun, Diana. I have decided to read ALL your haiku since I am a haiku nut.
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Date: 2/17/2012 9:55:00 PM
morning sun// shines warmth into faces --// cold eyes You can have this one if you like.
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Diana Rosser
Date: 2/20/2012 1:49:00 AM
Thank you for this suggestion, I changed it using your idea of cold, but I was trying to say something slightly different from your idea, but thank you for writing a comment and proposing a different idea.
Date: 2/17/2012 11:55:00 AM
Cute!!!
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