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divine drops of joy satin kisses melting hearts spring~time licks her lips

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Date: 3/23/2017 8:11:00 AM
Oh, Tim! What a beautiful haiku!!!!!! I like it, Thnaks for sharing it!! Rita. ^^ Rated-7
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Date: 3/15/2017 2:16:00 PM
Three divine and sensual lines, Tim!! Spring brings romance to life! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/13/2017 8:54:00 PM
I had to drop in on the Haiku tonight Tim. I do love that form and when it is done well, seventh heaven. Well, i have to say seventh heaven. A beautiful piece my friend. The pen runs gold in this one as it does in all your work. Excellent. I shall have to read more of your Haiku. This has to be a seven and a fave. Your Friend....Mike.
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Date: 3/12/2017 4:42:00 PM
Beautiful Tim! <3 This Haiku is full of so many good thoughts that bring a smile :)
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:38:00 AM
Excellent. A beautiful Haiku. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/11/2017 6:22:00 PM
very lovely, tim!
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Date: 3/11/2017 6:14:00 PM
ok ok stop it, leave some women for me!!! This was amazing!
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Date: 3/11/2017 2:26:00 PM
A beautiful haiku Tim :-) Spring sure is fabulous for writing :-) A fave, 7+++ blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/11/2017 2:20:00 PM
A real beauty Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2017 12:53:00 PM
- Beautiful ...Beautiful ...Beautiful ... a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2017 11:41:00 AM
Owww, i love this haiku, i struggle with them quite a bit, but I love writing them. This one is wonderful!
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:32:00 AM
Lovely haiku Tim..Sensual and sweet.
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Charma...it stems from a comment I made on Demetrios poem.

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