Haiku--mild heavenly breeze

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placed 9th in Brian Strand's Untitled Haiku contest

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mild heavenly breeze
respite from late summer heat
fall waits in the wings

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2025 4:31:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2025 8:32:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 8/31/2025 2:19:00 AM

A lovely scenic transition.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/31/2025 12:26:00 PM

Thanks so much, Vandana. Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2025 8:29:00 PM

Just a nice haiku, gentle and sweet! Hugs – Kim

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/31/2025 12:22:00 PM

Thanks a million, Kim! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2025 2:59:00 PM

Lucky you. You got on the winner list big congrats on your haiku gem

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/30/2025 7:40:00 PM

THANKS so much, Andrea! Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2025 1:46:00 PM

I am hoping so. I need the cooler air to flow on in. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/30/2025 7:40:00 PM

Thanks a million, Sara. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/30/2025 12:43:00 PM

What a lovely Haiku write you have here. Been hot here. Today around 110. Come on cool days... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/30/2025 7:42:00 PM

110~~WOW! It was only 90 here (Mississippi). Thanks so much, Paula Janice