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Haiku--Kids Play

kids play adults fan rain brings only brief respite front porch gathering May 28, 2018, entered in Mick Talbot's summer haiga-haiku contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2018 9:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/3/2018 9:52:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 5:05:00 PM

BACK with GRATS!!! You placed well!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/3/2018 9:25:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2018 10:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan! Janice

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/2/2018 5:09:00 PM

The twist could have been stronger, congratulations on your second place. Mick

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2018 5:33:00 PM

Thank you, Mick. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:15:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/2/2018 8:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! Janice

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/30/2018 8:58:00 AM

A lovely haiku, Janice I love front porches xxoo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/30/2018 9:28:00 AM

Thanks, Mike! Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2018 3:46:00 PM

Enjoy the day in sun and fun!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 3:50:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2018 2:30:00 PM

Sweet portrayal of what is happening today on Memorial day too.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 3:04:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Janice

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/28/2018 10:15:00 AM

Who's turn is it to churn the ice cream? Sunday on the porch, with mama humming church hymnals. Yep, sounds like summer to me:)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 10:20:00 AM

Yes, it does indeed, Danny! Janice

Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/28/2018 10:20:00 AM

Yes, it does indeed, Danny! Janice