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Haiku, I Love U

raven falcon dove inks on the wing plumed unplucked alight on the page 18.01.11 Composed for James Edward Lee Sr's Haiku, I Love U

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Date: 1/22/2018 6:39:00 PM
Lovely, congrats.
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Date: 1/20/2018 2:47:00 PM
Very creative work..I enjoyed reading your winner.Way to go..Sara
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Sara! xomo
Date: 1/20/2018 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful winning haiku, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Line! I have to laugh, I interpreted the contest as an I Love U to the Haiku ;) xomo!
Date: 1/20/2018 8:39:00 AM
Maureen, congrats on your nice placement in the contest for you awesome Haiku! Hugs, Sandra
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Sandra :) xomo
Date: 1/19/2018 9:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Maureen! Hugs Eve
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Eve :) xomo
Date: 1/19/2018 7:06:00 PM
Yeah, Mo - awesome, my friend ... this is a fav, and my winner! Congrats and blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you my friend :) xomo!
Date: 1/19/2018 7:01:00 PM
I think I already saw almost every one of the poems on the winner list. But here I am again to say CONGRATS and WELL DONE.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 1/19/2018 4:15:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Jan :) xomo
Date: 1/19/2018 3:05:00 PM
This haiku was another one I really loved Mo. Congratulations on your win! xxoo : )
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Connie :) xomo!
Date: 1/19/2018 1:59:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Maureen, congratulations...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/20/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 1/16/2018 11:36:00 AM
WOW! Hugs.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/16/2018 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Anisha :) xomo! <3
Date: 1/15/2018 9:25:00 PM
Just fabulous... hugs and smiles :)
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/15/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank You Akkina! Love your hugs and smiles :) returned!
Date: 1/15/2018 2:58:00 AM
Intriguing to say the very least, Maureen. It is almost as if you are inviting a person to try and interpret the words. I might have it all wrong...but I enjoyed putting my mind to it. My warmest regards! :) john
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/15/2018 8:31:00 AM
Such is with any art, no? :) I have learned since joining the soup that intent is moot in interpretation, once read, it's yours. Delighted you enjoyed this piece! Thank you John xomo
Date: 1/14/2018 6:52:00 PM
wow, what a metaphor this is. Such a beautiful image, Maureen!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/14/2018 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :) xomo!
Date: 1/13/2018 6:14:00 PM
Oh, this is wonderful, Dear Mo - love the phrasing and imagery - fav-ing, my friend! <3
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Greg, for all and the fave :) xomo!
Date: 1/13/2018 6:39:00 AM
Fantastic imagery. Great haiku!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thak you Bernard :) crazy bird lady strikes again xomo!
Date: 1/13/2018 5:45:00 AM
Fabulous
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Scott :)
Date: 1/13/2018 1:24:00 AM
A beautiful haiku Mo. I bet this does well! : )
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Connie :) xomo!
Date: 1/12/2018 7:47:00 PM
what a wonderful haiku Mo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thank you lovely :) xomo!
Date: 1/12/2018 4:48:00 PM
love this Maureen, a true Haiku.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thank you Harry :) xomo!
Date: 1/12/2018 12:50:00 PM
- Wonderful written, Maureen :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/13/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) a lovely weekend to you too! xomo
Date: 1/12/2018 7:18:00 AM
Lovely haiku doubling as a delightful tongue twister. Love it, Maureen.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/12/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you lovely! :) xomo
Date: 1/11/2018 11:38:00 PM
Very imaginative Maureen! Your creative mind is alight on the page.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/12/2018 9:55:00 AM
You have captured my bird brain so sweetly my friend <3
Date: 1/11/2018 3:41:00 PM
Clever...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/12/2018 9:52:00 AM
Thanks x
Date: 1/11/2018 2:05:00 PM
Free to write...Lovely Haiku...All the best Maureen
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 1/12/2018 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, with this contest prompt I noticed all my Haiku are for the birds :) xomo!
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