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Haiku, I Love U

raven falcon dove
                      inks on the wing plumed unplucked
                                   alight on the page








18.01.11


Composed for James Edward Lee Sr's
Haiku, I Love U

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/22/2018 6:39:00 PM Lovely, congrats. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/20/2018 2:47:00 PM Very creative work..I enjoyed reading your winner.Way to go..Sara Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 10:05:00 PM Thank you Sara! xomo

Line Gauthier Date: 1/20/2018 10:19:00 AM Congrats on your wonderful winning haiku, Maureen. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 10:04:00 PM Thank you Line! I have to laugh, I interpreted the contest as an I Love U to the Haiku ;) xomo!

Sandra Haight Date: 1/20/2018 8:39:00 AM Maureen, congrats on your nice placement in the contest for you awesome Haiku! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:43:00 AM Thank you Sandra :) xomo

Eve Roper Date: 1/19/2018 9:23:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Maureen! Hugs Eve Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:32:00 AM Thank you Eve :) xomo

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 1/19/2018 7:06:00 PM Yeah, Mo - awesome, my friend ... this is a fav, and my winner! Congrats and blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3 Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:32:00 AM Thank you my friend :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/19/2018 7:01:00 PM I think I already saw almost every one of the poems on the winner list. But here I am again to say CONGRATS and WELL DONE. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:30:00 AM Thank you Andrea :)

Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2018 4:15:00 PM Many congrats on your win Mo:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:29:00 AM Thank you Jan :) xomo

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/19/2018 3:05:00 PM This haiku was another one I really loved Mo. Congratulations on your win! xxoo : ) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:27:00 AM Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Charlie Smith Date: 1/19/2018 1:59:00 PM Beautifully crafted Maureen, congratulations... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/20/2018 8:26:00 AM Thank you Charlie :)

Anisha Dutta Date: 1/16/2018 11:36:00 AM WOW! Hugs. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/16/2018 11:43:00 AM Thank you Anisha :) xomo! <3

Akkina Downing Date: 1/15/2018 9:25:00 PM Just fabulous... hugs and smiles :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/15/2018 9:31:00 PM Thank You Akkina! Love your hugs and smiles :) returned!

John Fleming Date: 1/15/2018 2:58:00 AM Intriguing to say the very least, Maureen. It is almost as if you are inviting a person to try and interpret the words. I might have it all wrong...but I enjoyed putting my mind to it. My warmest regards! :) john Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/15/2018 8:31:00 AM Such is with any art, no? :) I have learned since joining the soup that intent is moot in interpretation, once read, it's yours. Delighted you enjoyed this piece! Thank you John xomo

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/14/2018 6:52:00 PM wow, what a metaphor this is. Such a beautiful image, Maureen! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/14/2018 9:04:00 PM Thank you Andrea :) xomo!

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 1/13/2018 6:14:00 PM Oh, this is wonderful, Dear Mo - love the phrasing and imagery - fav-ing, my friend! <3 Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:24:00 PM Thank you Greg, for all and the fave :) xomo!

Bernard Chan Date: 1/13/2018 6:39:00 AM Fantastic imagery. Great haiku! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:25:00 AM Thak you Bernard :) crazy bird lady strikes again xomo!

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 1/13/2018 5:45:00 AM Fabulous Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:24:00 AM Thank you Scott :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/13/2018 1:24:00 AM A beautiful haiku Mo. I bet this does well! : ) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:24:00 AM Thank you Connie :) xomo!

Jan Allison Date: 1/12/2018 7:47:00 PM what a wonderful haiku Mo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:22:00 AM Thank you lovely :) xomo!

Harry Horsman Date: 1/12/2018 4:48:00 PM love this Maureen, a true Haiku. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:21:00 AM Thank you Harry :) xomo!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/12/2018 12:50:00 PM - Wonderful written, Maureen :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/13/2018 11:20:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) a lovely weekend to you too! xomo

Line Gauthier Date: 1/12/2018 7:18:00 AM Lovely haiku doubling as a delightful tongue twister. Love it, Maureen. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/12/2018 9:57:00 AM Thank you lovely! :) xomo

James Swartz Date: 1/11/2018 11:38:00 PM Very imaginative Maureen! Your creative mind is alight on the page. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/12/2018 9:55:00 AM You have captured my bird brain so sweetly my friend <3

Silent One Date: 1/11/2018 3:41:00 PM Clever... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/12/2018 9:52:00 AM Thanks x

Arturo Michael Date: 1/11/2018 2:05:00 PM Free to write...Lovely Haiku...All the best Maureen Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/12/2018 9:51:00 AM Thanks Arturo, with this contest prompt I noticed all my Haiku are for the birds :) xomo!

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